Question

英语短文改错，请帮帮我把这篇改一下错，每行有一个

Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.
I like reading book or doing my homework
at home while listening music. But during every winter
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives
get here to play the cards.I am very tired
of the noise the game makes,and my parents
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me!

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> go
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. crowding -> crowded
I like reading book or doing my homework or -> and
at home while listening music. But during every winter listening -. listening to the
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives many -> Many
get here to play the cards.I am very tired get -> come
of the noise the game makes,and my parents and -> but
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read quitly －＞quite
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at they －＞ I
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me! helps －＞ help

Answer 2

我的答案应该是最准确的：

1. went → go
2. crowding → crowded
3. book → books
4. listening和music之间加入to
5. home → house (如果有一行正确，则此行无错，楼主确定每行都有错误吗？)
6. 去掉the
7. and → but
8. quietly → quiet
9. they → I
10. helps → help

Answer 3

went 改为go
crowding crowded
book books
listening to
home house
去掉the
and but
quitely quite
they it
diaturbed disturbed，helps help

Answer 4

看好哦 谁答对了采纳谁的哦
1.went -go
2.crowding-crowded
3.or-and
4.listening to the
5.home-house
6.去掉the
7.and-but
8.quitely-quite
9.they-it
10.helps-help