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拜托大家，帮我修改一下翻译吧！谢谢！

张婷你今晚有空吗
Zhangting, are you free tonight?
呃。。我打算在家看电影呢，有事吗
Er…I intend to watch movies at home,what’s the matter?
哦，我本来还想叫你一起逛街呢
I had plan to go shopping with you .
逛街啊，没问题啊，电影什么时候看都行呢。但逛街可是我的最爱。
Shopping? All right. whenever I could see the film, but shopping is my Favorite.
这也是我的最爱呢。尤其是喜欢各式各样的裙子，一看到漂亮的裙子我就会特别兴奋。
It is also my favorite. Especially I Like all kinds of skirts. When I saw the attractive skirt I would be very excited
兴奋吗？为什么这么喜欢裙子啊？
Excited? Why do you like the skirt most?
因为我觉得裙子是女孩的专利品，女孩子都希望别人看到自己美丽的一面，而且我认为穿裙子能体现一个人的气质。你呢，喜欢买什么？
Because I think The skirt is girl's patented article, all the Girls want others to see their beautiful side, and Wear a skirt could reflect a person's temperament. What about you? what kind of products attracts you most?why?

我特别买鞋子，一到鞋店，我就走不出来了。看着各种各样的鞋子，我会很开心。因为一双鞋会起到画龙点睛的作用，，漂亮的鞋子也会让人更加自信~
I I like the shoe very much, once I went in the Shoe store, I can not come out. Looked at all kinds of shoes, I feel so happy. Because the shoes Have the effect that make the finishing point, and a pair of suitable shoes could Let you feel more confident.

我知道山大路上的一家鞋店，那的鞋子都非常好看，我很
多朋友都喜欢到那买鞋呢。要不咱今晚去那看看？
I know a shoe store on the shanda road, In that store the shoes are very attractive, a lot of my friend buy shoes in that store. Why don't we go to see it tonight?
真的吗，好啊！我真是迫不及待的想去看看了。 对了，你有没有想逛的地方？
Really? That’s great! I can’t wait anymore.by the way, Do you have the place which wants to go?
有啊，我在一家店看中了一条裙子，但是还没决定买不买。
Yes, I like a skirt in one store, but didn’t decide buy or not.
是什么款式的啊？
What style?
一条蓝色的连衣裙，手感很好。
A blue dress, and it feel very good.
好啊，那我今晚帮你参谋一下，不过我相信你穿蓝色一定很美。
Ok, I will give you some advice tonight, but I believe you will be beautiful in the bule.
希望如此啊，那就这么决定了，晚上7点见。
I hope so. It is a deal.shall we meet At seven o 'clock?
好的。
Ok. see you

麻烦了！

Answer 1

楼主的语法、拼写错有一些，我就不一一指出了，我改了一部分，你自己对照着看吧

我特别买鞋子，一到鞋店，我就走不出来了。看着各种各样的鞋子，我会很开心。因为一双鞋会起到画龙点睛的作用，漂亮的鞋子也会让人更加自信~
I like shoes very much, once I went into a shoe store, I can not come out. I feel so happy while looking at all kinds of shoes, because shoes make the finishing point, and a pair of suitable shoes could make you more confident.

我知道山大路上的一家鞋店，那的鞋子都非常好看，我很
多朋友都喜欢到那买鞋呢。要不咱今晚去那看看？
I know a shoe store in Shanda Road. In that store the shoes are very attractive. A lot of my friends buy shoes in that store. Why don't we go to see it tonight?
真的吗，好啊！我真是迫不及待的想去看看了。 对了，你有没有想逛的地方？
Really? That’s great! I can’t wait anymore. By the way, is there anywhere you want to go?
有啊，我在一家店看中了一条裙子，但是还没决定买不买。
Yes, I like a skirt in a store, but I haven't decided to buy or not.
是什么款式的啊？
What style?
一条蓝色的连衣裙，手感很好。
A blue dress, and it is very good to the feel.
好啊，那我今晚帮你参谋一下，不过我相信你穿蓝色一定很美。
Ok, I will give you some advice tonight, but I believe you will be beautiful in the blue.
希望如此啊，那就这么决定了，晚上7点见。
I hope so. It is a deal. Shall we meet at seven o 'clock?
好的。
Ok. see you