Question

以"On Giving Birth Abroad"写一篇120词的英语作文.要求:为什么中国父母

欢在国外生小孩，说出自己的观点

Answer 1

相关范文：
关于青少年是否应该出国的问题讨论，之前我们作文地带也提供过几篇类似的范文，观点大多都是主流观点，毕竟考试需要以正面的思想来对待，方能写出正面的作文，小J希望大家在今后的写作当中，一定要抛弃个人思想于作文题外，这样方可保证您的作文得到一个比较中层的分数。
Teenagers' Studying Abroad
1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学
2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的
3. 我认为这种观点是不对的
【范文】
Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance
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of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.
After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring
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favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

【点评】
　　第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法，之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因；第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见，然后分两点来阐述理由；最后一段进行总结，并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。
　　范文首句点题，指出青少年留学这一现象，并给出支持者的理由，即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈，而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。第二段给出反对理由。首先，早期独立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱，所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。
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末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处，但令人担忧的问题也很多。
　　第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的机会做某事”。第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的，存有偏见的”；第三句中的aim at表示“目的在于”；第四句中的guarantee表示“保证”，adapt to表示“适应”，fierce表示“激烈的”，修饰competition(竞争)。