Question

一个翻译句子，哪位大神可以帮忙翻译一下？

the diminution of emphasis on the arts and the humanities and the corresponding increased emphasis on business ans STEM discipline has resulted in a normative conception of national progress that excludes aesthetic education

Answer 1

the diminution of emphasis on the arts and the humanities and the corresponding increased emphasis on business ans STEM discipline has resulted in a normative conception of national progress that excludes aesthetic education
对艺术和人文学科的重视程度的降低以及对商业与STEM学科的关注程度的相应提高，导致了对国家进步的规范性概念，其中排除了审美教育

Answer 2

对艺术和人文学科的重视程度降低，对商业和社会学科的重视程度相应增加，导致了一种排除美育的国家进步的规范观念

Answer 3

可以多参考一下往年的优秀译文，祝贺取得好名次