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请帮我查找一下这段话中的语法错误并改正,谢谢大家的帮助,我急用

Jane Austen was a British realistic novelist. In her lifetime, Britain was at the period of transition from the earlier Capitalism to Capitalist Industrialization. But the society developed rather slowly in the countryside. It was rather difficult for women to get education and employment. Young women of upper social class could not get money except by marrying a rich man or inheriting from someone. Although her family had a large number of fortunes, she could not be the heiress; few of them become governess a kind of savants.① Austen depicted the life of country clergymen, landed gentry and their families. Marriage mainly determined women’s social status. The characters in Austen’s novels have something in common with her neighbors, friends and relatives. Austen writings are all about the people and the family. At that time, the society was filled with the possession and the control of a fortune, since men inherited all fortunes. Women had to obey men and gained their happiness through marriage. Marriage has no natural relation to love, and marriage belongs to society. It is a social contrast. Other than marriage, no career or occupation was open to women. “Marriage of Austen’s time actually was a kind of foundation stone and its function was mainly the key to the connection of fortune, the decision of relation and the right of inheritance”.

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Jane Austen was a British realistic novelist. In her lifetime, Britain was at the period of transition from the earlier Capitalism to Capitalist Industrialization. But the society developed rather slowly in the countryside. It was rather difficult for women to get education and employment. Young women of upper social class could not get money except by marrying a rich man or inheriting from someone. Although her family had a large number of fortunes, she could not be the heiress; few of them become governess a kind of savants.① Austen depicted the life of country clergymen, landed gentry and their families. Marriage mainly determined women’s social status. The characters in Austen’s novels have something in common with her neighbors, friends and relatives. Austen's works are all about the human and the family. At that time, the society was filled with the possession and the control of a fortune, since men inherited all fortunes. Women had to follow men and gained their happiness through marriage. Marriage had no natural relation to love, and marriage belonged to society. It is a social contrast. Other than marriage, no career or occupation was open to women. “Marriage of Austen’s time actually was a kind of foundation stone and its function was mainly the key to the connection of fortune, the decision of relation and the right of inheritance”.
没有什么语法错误。但有的地方表达不是特别准确。但我也修行不够，不知道怎么改