Question

英语翻译

I am twelve years old,but I am middle school student.So I like Children's Day,In primary school,we can play games,and receive lots of gifts.We are very happy,but in middle school,we don't have Children's Day,We can't play games,and don't receive lots of gifts. I'm expecting the Children's Day to come soon,And I hope our Children's Day just like ago happiness.
c以上英语是我自己写的，望有语句不对的或需要补充麻烦帮助改动一下，谢谢

Answer 1

I am twelve years old,and I am a middle school student.I like Children's Day very much.In a primary school,we can play games,and receive lots of gifts.We are very happy.While in middle a school,we don't have Children's Day,We can't play games,nor can we receive lots of gifts. I'm expecting the Children's Day to come soon,And I hope we all can be very happy that day.

总体来看还是写的很不错的，我把里边的标点符号错误还有一些连接词的错误改了一下，其他的都是对的。非常不错。

Answer 2

我十二岁了,但是我中学生. 所以我喜欢儿童节,在小学,我们可以玩游戏,并得到许多礼物我们很高兴,但在中学时,我们没有儿童节,我们不能玩游戏,并没有收到许多礼物。我期待着儿童节的到来,我希望我们的儿童节就像以前的幸福。

Answer 3

我现在十二岁了，但是我还是个中学生。我很喜欢儿童节，在小学的时候我们可以玩游戏，收到很多礼物，我们非常快乐。但是在中学，我们没有了儿童节，我们不能玩游戏和收到很多礼物。我很期待儿童节快点到来，我希望我们的儿童节像以前一样快乐。