Question

谁能帮我用英语翻译一段话，谢谢啦！

帮我用英语翻译下面一段话：
你好！很冒昧的打扰你，我是一个中国的书迷，对与《桃花鱼》这本书，莫名已久，也寻找了很久，今天终于在你的网站看到这本书，但是你的价格让我望而却步，冒昧的问一下这本书能便宜一点吗？张远飞

附：《桃花鱼》=《Peach Blossom Fish—detail of The Clouds Return》
谢谢大家的踊跃回答，但是答案只能给一个人。谢谢!

Answer 1

Hello,
I'm a big fan of <Peach blossom Fish>. It's really exciting to find the book on your website. However, the price is too high to me. Would it be possible for me to get a discount?
Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,
YuanFei Zhang from China

说明：一般外国人email里，很少上来就说“对不起打扰您”，除非你是推销邮件、自认为是垃圾邮件。从你要说的文字上看，你更像是要购买，要成为其客户，因此直接咨询就好了。中文语气过于客气，直接翻译西方人觉得比较啰嗦，因此英文适当修改，保留你的主要意思并保持简练。
我认为在之前的回答中， zhoutian_cn的回答是可以的。

Answer 2

Hi！Excuse me for intruding; I’m a Chinese who is steeped in books. I have been admiring the reputation of the book 《Peach Blossom Fish—detail of The Clouds Return》and looking for it for quite some time, today I finally discover this book on your website; but its selling price is really prohibitive to me. May I dare to ask whether I can get this book at a discount?

Yours truly,

Y.F.Zhang

【英语牛人团荣誉会员】

Answer 3

Hello. Sorry to bother you. I am a fan of Peach Blossom Fish—detail of The Clouds Return from China. I have heard a lot about it and looked for it a long time. Today I finally see the book on your website but the price is a little bit higher. So, can this book be a little cheaper?

英文书名没有书名号的哈，是下划线，或斜体

Answer 4

Hi, sorry for disturbing. I am really a big fans of your "Peach Blossom Fish - detail of the clouds return", which I've been searched for a long time. I was sooooo excited when I saw this book was selling on your website, but the price is definitely unaffordable for me. I'm just wondering if there's any discount for this book?

Answer 5

Hello！Excuse my disturbing that I have been finding and wondering about the book Peach Blossom Fish—detail of The Clouds Return for a long time as I am a Chinese storyteller's fan. And I finnally found it on your website, while your charge really hang me back. May I be so bold as to ask would the book be a little cheaper? Yuanfei Zhan