Question

英语作文 网络教育，你的观点以及原因

Answer 1

引用红竹石影的回答：
Online Education
Recent years,there has taken a great rise on online education,this way of teaching make people feel very convinient,they can study at any time and any places,only if they have the computers to go onlie.
The reasons of this phenomenon,I think has two reasons.the frist reason is the developementof the computer.at last decade,the computers which are mostly in the reseach institution had came onto thousands of families.they brought the informations from any corner in the world,go along with this,the education style has improved a lot,the second reason I think is the rage of the studying people becoming wider,they are all kinds of society members,for example,the workers,managers and even some old people,they can study without go to school at a certain time and receive the online.
In my own practice,I think it advisable to study on line,but at the same timewe should control ourselves to avoid other interruptions,such as study but with QQ opened,in order to ensure the quality of studying,I hope the online education can play a good role for us!

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Answer 2

Online Education
Recent years,there has taken a great rise on online education,this way of teaching make people feel very convinient,they can study at any time and any places,only if they have the computers to go onlie.
The reasons of this phenomenon,I think has two reasons.the frist reason is the developementof the computer.at last decade,the computers which are mostly in the reseach institution had came onto thousands of families.they brought the informations from any corner in the world,go along with this,the education style has improved a lot,the second reason I think is the rage of the studying people becoming wider,they are all kinds of society members,for example,the workers,managers and even some old people,they can study without go to school at a certain time and receive the online.
In my own practice,I think it advisable to study on line,but at the same timewe should control ourselves to avoid other interruptions,such as study but with QQ opened,in order to ensure the quality of studying,I hope the online education can play a good role for us!