Question

请帮忙翻译以下一段文字，小弟感激不尽：

我叫XXX，来自山东XX，出生于19XX年，我在我的家乡度过了我的童年生活直到我中专毕业，那里留下了我的很多回忆，有苦有甜，当时总让我怀念。念完中专，我有了我的第一份工作，是珠海XX公司担任QA担当，主要负责进料的检验工作，使用三次元，投影仪等检验仪器对原材进行检验对来料异常的反馈，及异常问题的跟踪及处理。虽然珠海那是个美丽的城市，但是一年后我来到了和她一样美丽的城市苏州，到苏州后，我在XX公司担任了QA品质工程师，尽管我在XX公司做的非常出色，因工作成绩突出而两次得到加薪，但是06年我还是离职了，虽然我很留恋在XX公司的工作，同事，因为我收到了上帝的礼物————我的孩子，因为孩子对我来说是最重要的。
前几天我在网上靠到贵公司招聘的信息，了解到贵公司是和XX公司做一样的产品，我感到非常兴奋，因为贵公司对该职位的要求，就像是为我量身定做的一样，马上投了简历。今天能得到这样一个机会我很高兴，我非常希望能为贵公司工作，如果可以，我将用我的经验和热忱来赢得贵公司的认可。谢谢！
谢谢点点3724，不过感觉不是很满意，有些地方我一看感觉有点问题，比如一句句子用了Although后面还有But等，记忆中好像是不可以这样用的哦！
不过还是谢谢了！
不知能否再改进一下呢！

Answer 1

:)水平有限.慎用....而且你写的中文MS也有点不妥...还有些专业术语就**了..
My name is XXX,I comes from Shandong XX and born in the 19XX ,I passed my childhood in mine hometown until my specialized middle school graduation,there left behind me very to recollect,It was sweet and painful,at that time always let me fondly remember.When I graduated from the specialized middle school,I had my first work,Is the Zhuhai XX company holds the post of the QA acting,Primary cognizance feeding examination work,Uses three dimensions,Testing instruments and so on projecting apparatus carry on the examination to the original material to expect the unusual feedback,And unusual question track and processing.Although Zhuhai that is a beautiful city,But after a year I arrived and she equally beautiful city Suzhou,After I arrived Suzhou,I have held the post of Engineer QA in XX company quality,Although I do extremely splendidly in XX company,Prominent two times obtains but because of the job performance raises in salary,But 06 years I left job,Although I am reluctant to part with very much in XX company's work,Colleague,Because I have received God's gift - - - - my child,Because the child to me is most important.
I saw your firm employment advertise couple days ago the informationon-line ,Understood your firm is and XX company makes the same product,I feel extremely excitedly,Because of your firm to this position request,Likely is measures the dissimilarity for me which the body makes to order,Horse upthrow resume. Today can have this kind of opportunity I to be very happy,I hoped extremely can be your firm work,If may,I will use my experience and zealous win your firm the approval. Thanks!