Question

要参加面试了，需要一份英文自我介绍，请大家帮一下忙，谢谢了

我叫～ 年龄～
兴趣爱好广泛，尤其喜欢唱歌和画画
在家喜欢听听音乐，看看书．
我毕业于旅游职业学校．
毕业后在～酒店前厅部工作了4年，然后又在～物业公司做前台接待．
我的性格开朗，具有很好的沟通能力．
我的父亲是一名干部，母亲是一名会计．
如果我得到这份工作，我会努力提高我的英语水平．

恩 大致就这些了，希望大家能多帮帮忙，谢谢了

Answer 1

My name is xxx. I am XX. I have broad interests, including singing and drawing. I like listening music and reading at home. I graduated from XXX tourism vocational school. After graduation, I worked at the front hall with XXX hotel. After that, I worked as a receptionist with XXX real-estate company. I have excellent communication skills with out-going personality. My father is a senior officer and my mother is an accoutant. If I can success, I will try my best to improve my English.

Answer 2

我给你修改的英文也自然一点啊。没有一个字一个字翻译，但是本来有的意思现在还是都有的。
good
morning/afternoon,
my
name
is
x
and
i
am
turning/i
turned
(看你生日几号）
twenty-two
this
year.
i
graduated
from
x
university
with
a
degree
in
electronic
commerce
in
2008.
having
been
working
in
customer
service
since
graduation,
i
am
experienced
in
the
field
which
will
help
me
in
becoming
an
excellent
(你要申请的职业）.
i
possess
excellent
computer
skills,
including
microsoft
office.
i'm
enthusiastic,
responsible
and
amicable
and,
if
hired,
i
am
confident
i
will
blend
into
the
team
at
(公司/部门名字）very
quickly.
thank
you.
(我也不清楚自我介绍之后他们还会不会和你聊天下去，如果不会的话可以说thank
you
and
have
a
good
day，比较地道）