Question

英语 短文改错

Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came
sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch,I 1.______
went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter,and 2.______
all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my 3.______
room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air 4.______
and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch 5.______
them,big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back 6.______
into house,it was raining harder and harder. I tried 7.______
very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly 8.______
crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran 9.______
out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the 10._____
top of the back room.
可以帮忙改出一个也好的

Answer 1

1.sudden 改成 suddenly,因为 CAME是动词，要用副数修饰
2.hotter 改成hot
3.is改成was
4.PIECES 前加THE
5.out后加个of
6.DROP 变复数
7.into后加个the
8.loud
9. 对
10.broke改成broken

Answer 2

1 suddenly
2 hotter----- hot
3 is----was
4 The Pieces of paper
5 flew out of the open
6 the big drop of rain
7 into the house
8 loudly ---loud
9应该对
10 broke--broken

Answer 3

1 suddenly
2 hotter----- hot
3 is----was
4 The Pieces of paper
5 flew out of the open
6 the big drop of rain
7 into the house
8 loudly ---loud

Answer 4

over→more
hotter→hot
is→was
high→into
drop→drops
sound→noise
broke→broken
loudly→loud
big→tall
top→roof