My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with othe...
MybrotherTomwasveryselfishwhenhewasalittleboy.Hedidnotwantsharethingswithotherpeople....
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find . Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy . That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock on the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps his classmates with their lessons.
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小题1:第二句want后面加 to 小题2:第三句them 改为it 小题3:where 改为which/that 小题4:第五句other改为others 小题5:第六句is改为was 小题6:第七句making改为made 小题7:第九句 on去掉 小题8:loudly改为loud 小题9:on改为in 小题10:第十句 difference 改为 different |
小题1:固定词组want to do sth 小题2:It指代a chocolate cake 小题3:关系代词which/that指代place作为find的宾语。 小题4:others指其他人。 小题5:environment 名词环境:environment本文的时态是过去时。 小题6:这里需要的是一个谓语动词, 小题7:one night单独做时间状语。 小题8:用形容词修饰名词music 小题9:在早晨使用in the morning 小题10:这里是形容词作表语。 |
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