Question

帮我英语翻译

成为成功的学生

我一直以来都有一个梦想，那就是成为一名哈佛大学的学生。我至今依然在努力着。我很幸运，我考上了重点高中，这离我的大学梦又进了一步。一想到我哥为出国留学而努力地学习英语。
他一直在影响着我。让我有动力去我目标中的大学--- 哈佛。
希望我的愿望可以尽快实现。
我愿意为努此而努力。

Answer 1

Becoming a sucessful student.

I have always had a dream, that is to become a student of Harvard University.
Even now, i am still working hard on my dream.
I am very lucky, because I got into one of the key high schools,
which took me one step closer to achieving my dream.
When I think about how much effort my brother puts into studying English to broad overseas,
the thought of it inspires me and gives me the motivation to work hard achieving my goal- Harvard.
I really hope that my wish will soon, come true.
For the sake of my dream, I am willing to work hard.

从原文直接翻译的话，句子不会通。。。
所以加了一些助词等。。。。

希望帮助到你了O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 2

看了大多数翻译得都不怎么样，先不说地不地道，语法错误就满篇都是。
光看第一句，如果非得用从句一个字一个字地翻，那么“当哈佛学生”该是“梦想”的同位语，that后面要跟一个句子，比如: I've always had the dream that I will be a member of the students of Harvard.（d当然这样怎么翻都别扭）"I Have a Dream" 里面不就全是这样的句式吗？
哥们儿，要是是作业就自己做吧，就这么几句话。另外你写的中文也不是很通顺。

Answer 3

I have always had a dream that was to become a Harvard student. I have still working on it. I was lucky, I was admitted to a key high school, which from my college dream one step further. The thought of my brother to study abroad and efforts to learn English.

He has affected me. I have power to my goals --- Harvard university.

I hope my wish can be as soon as possible.

I am willing to work hard for this.

Answer 4

I always have a dream that I become a Harvard student. I am still working on it until now. I am lucky that I was admitted to a key high school, which makes a big step for getting closed to my college dream. While thinking of my brother's efforts for learning English abroad, I am affected to bring power to my goal --- Harvard university.
I hope my wish could be realized as soon as possible.
I am willing to work hard for it.

Answer 5

这是我自己写的 你好好看看有没有什么不通的地方 I have always had a dream that was to become a Harvard student. I have still been working on it. I was lucky, I was admitted to a key high school, which from my college dream is one step further. my brother learns English hard to study abroad
He has a deeply effect on me. thus I have much power to reach my goals --- Harvard university.
I hope my wish can come true as soon as possible.
I am willing to work hard for this.
累死了 飘走~~~

Answer 6

成为成功的学生
Be a successful student
我一直以来都有一个梦想，那就是成为一名哈佛大学的学生。我至今依然在努力着。我很幸运，我考上了重点高中，这离我的大学梦又进了一步。一想到我哥为出国留学而努力地学习英语。他一直在影响着我。让我有动力去我目标中的大学--- 哈佛。
I have a dream is to be a university student in Harvard.I still keep going.Fortunately. I was come into key high school.It's mean I got closet to my dream.When I remember my brother try his best to study English for study abroad.He always inspire me and make me have force to go to my university----Harvard.

希望我的愿望可以尽快实现。
我愿意为努此而努力。
I wish my dream can achieve earlier.
I'd like to struggle for it.