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It rained hard on a Sunday morning . I got up early and ariived at the house for children without parents as usual. As soon as I entered there ,all the children came over to me and everyone looked very excited .In the morning , I taught them an English song which was called Twinkle ,Twinkle , Little Star . In the afternoon , we prepared a birthday party that is to be be held at suppertime for little Joe. The children had a very pleasant time, and I felt very happy, too. How I hope more and more people can help these poor lovely children!
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It rained hard on a Sunday morning . I got up early and ariived at the house for children without parents as usual. As soon as I entered there ,all the children came over to me and everyone looked very excited .In the morning , I taught them an English song which was called Twinkle ,Twinkle , Little Star . In the afternoon , we prepared a birthday party that is to be be held at suppertime for little Joe. The children had a very pleasant time, and I felt very happy, too. How I hope more and more people can help these poor lovely children!
希望可以帮到你！
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