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紧急!请高手帮我修改一下 我写的英语句子的语法 拜托了 需要有人指出错误帮我修正一下!!!

写了5个 anedotol
有些写的不是很通顺 请帮我修改一下语法或句子不通顺的地方 拜托了

1) Aftermom goes off to work, they are playing around; climbing on the table, running around,but worse, one of the kids make pees in the truck. So the dads have to clean out the truck and ask them to get out from the toilet.

2) The kids refuses to listen. They refused to listen whatever their parents says (for example, the dad ask Gigda to sit down and eat the meal, she says ‘’ no, Idon’t want that. And dad didn’t do anything to help her eat the meal. In the next day, the other kid get refused to eat as well.

3) The kids have no Self-discipline all. They do whatever they wants; drawing on thewalls, destroy things and hitting each other and so on.

4) When mom started to get the kids involved to some craft time. Mom asks Geoda:‘do you want tofinish your picture, Geoda?’’ ‘’take out this from your finger and stoptouching it and use glue stick and make your picture !). The mother didn’t give the child freedom to do what she wants. She ignore the child when Geoda says’’help me, help me’’.

5) In the morning, mom take the kids out for relax a bit.
But when Jowent out few minutes later to see what happen, she can not see the momanywhere. she only see Milo was digging a hole and Gigda playing the swing. Andshe noticed that those two kids without being supervised.

Answer 1

1 时态方面，有现在式有过去式，建议统一时态为过去式。

2 有一些常用短语问题 take the kids out for relax a bit可以修改为：took the kids out for relaxing

3 有些句子写的复杂了：two kids without being supervised. 改成：
two kids unsupervised。 我帮你重新写一个，私信给你吧。

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