Question

2010 广东高考 英语作文

最好是加上参考的答案

Answer 1

第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
以下是一则 关于中国政府决定禁烟的 报道的主要内容。
内 容：公共场所禁烟
实施时间：2011年1月1日起
实施范围：全国
目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟
措 施：张贴禁烟标志
相关数据：(1)吸烟人数：约3 5亿
(2)分 布：男性75％；女性25％
(3)受二手烟’影响人数：约5 4亿
(4)因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万／年
*二手烟：second-hand smoke
[写作内容] 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：
1、禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围； 2、目标和措施 3、相关数据。
[写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

参考范文：
My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st2011. The main aim is to make every public room has no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke.

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?
Then one day Ethan’s mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.
In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.
[写作内容] 1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2、以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：
(1)、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法： (2)、你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的；
(3)、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。
[写作要求]
1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

参考范文：
The passage tells us Enthan’s mother and many schools rewarded kids with cash to improve their performance and change their bad habits.However,psychologists point out it will cause negative consequences.
As far as I’m concerned…..encouraging kids with cash will….Take one of my classmates as a typical example,he …..As a result,not only did he not become a good student but worse still,it aggravated his sereve situation.
Being no exception,my parents also care about my studying.but they…..Finally,I became a top students in my class.
From what has been mentioned above,we can drew the conclusion that….On one hand…..On the other hand…..Only in these ways can parents make their kids grow up healthfully.

读写任务还需改进，希望能帮到你啦 O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 2

第一篇 禁烟的

禁烟时间：
2011 - 1 -1开始

目的 ：公共场所室内不准吸烟
措施：禁烟标示
吸烟人数 3.5亿 男的75% 女的25%
受二手烟影响的 5.4亿
因为二手烟死的 每年增加10万

第二篇 是否用钱鼓励学生学习