Question

跪求2010高考天津卷英语满分作文，谢谢了

假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
·对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）
·个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
·你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.

Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.

I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!

Thank you!

【思路分析】

这是一篇很实用的演讲稿。旨在考查学生在实际生活中在某个具体场合下灵活使用英文来表达自己思想的能力。考查学生学以致用。本演讲稿有三个写作要点：1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。然后自由发挥写出适当的结尾。

【较高级的结构和短语】form/develop a good habit of doing…; take part in; The first thing we can do is to make…; pay attention to 等。

Answer 2

Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.

I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!

Thank you!