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短文改错，急求答案WhenI was young,painting appealed on me greatly.I was so much crazy about
painting thatI would paint anytime and anywhere.But my parents encouraged me be a
photographer.They even bought me the expensive camera and all kinds of profession
books.In the end,therefore,I became a teacher.Life is unpredictable.Sometimes you
may not achieve the dream we once have in our childhood.But it doesn't mean we will have
to give up.We can make it a hobby.Personally speaking,painting is the only thing which
makes me relaxed in my spare times.

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When I was young,painting appealed on(1.改成to) me greatly.I was so much(2.去掉这个much) crazy about
painting that I would paint anytime and(3.改成or) anywhere.But my parents encouraged me (4.此处加to) be a
photographer.They even bought me the(5.改成an) expensive camera and all kinds of profession(6.改成professional)
books. In the end,therefore(7.改成however),I became a teacher.Life is unpredictable. Sometimes you
may not achieve the dream we once have(8.改成had) in our childhood. But it doesn't mean we will have
to give up.We can make it a hobby.Personally speaking,painting is the only thing which(9.改成that)
makes me relaxed in my spare times(10.改成time).