Question

关于一篇英文作文

我现在刚开始学雅思 留了一个题目 大概是关于An old thing的 大概150字就可以谁能给我提供一些素材？或者是发一篇范文 或者哪位高手能写一篇
我想参考怎么写 我不大会写结构（请认真点 我想要的是范文 如果有讲解最好 但是文章一定要有 ） 谢谢大家勒 分数 我尽量多加一点~~
那个 不好意思了 恩 我想写的文章大概是 写一个旧的东西 可以是小时候经常玩的 也可以是一个老古董

然后 大致描述一下 然后写一写关于他的故事 写点感受 什么的 不是那种议论文 这样 好像高考的那种形式
是不行的

Answer 1

楼主给的资料太少了。。雅思的作文是issue呢还是argue呢，都不知道啊。。还有就是论述的点没有提到。太片面的东西很难不跑题。。
如果作为issue来写的话，可以讨论旧事物的利与弊，开门见山，在第一段点名主旨，第一段最后一句写中心句。然后正文分三段写论据，比如说我支持应该正是过去，论点123. 第一前车之鉴后事之师，第二，忘记过去意味着背叛。第三，如果只是怀念过去，不思进取，将会导致无法前进。。
范文那我就按我说的写一个。。。150词还是挺好写的。。。
an old thing
recently, people hold the view whether it is a general truth that an old thing should be remembered. as adolescents in the new ages, we are facing tremendous challenges today. lots of students maintain that an old thing would be good for us.
first of all, it is usually said that lessons learned from the past can guide one in the future. being teenagers, there's a long way for us. nevertheless, had we forgot the past, we would not success easily.
secondly, forgetting the past means betraying yourself. for example, there was a young migrant worker come from countryside. when he succeed, he wanted to wipe out his history in the past, including his family. how sadly a boy he was.
thirdly, the rest of the students argue that it would be harmful for us to remember the past all the time. if a person recalls his happy time of childhood everyday, he will fail to achieve any goal in the future.
taking all the conclusion above into consideration, it is easy to draw the idea that remember an old thing would be helpful for us. only in this way, can we build up a harmony society.

额。。。这是临时写的，字数没把握好。都写这么多了，楼主给分吧。。。