Question

求英语大佬帮忙看一下

关于5G的一篇英语作文，题目没要求，字数120词左右，有劳英语学的好一点的朋友帮我批改一下，看有没有语法错误，谢谢！

Answer 1

整体语句比较通顺，但是细节错误也有一些：

1. Internet, which is a sign of the technology time. 这是想表达因特网是技术时代的标志？一般用信息时代information age. 非要说技术时代那也该是 technology age.

2. driverless 首字母大写 Driverless, 或者用Driverless technology 我觉得更好

3. Internet paly an vital role, 语法错误，play 改为 plays

4. We can't help but believe the ... 这句的 We can't help but believe 感觉是为了用上短语应加的，整个句子的逻辑很怪，不如直接删了。

5. not only the faster information这句，单词“information”拼错了

6. 其实第三段我觉得整句话逻辑都有问题，改为5G age is not only a time can provide faster information cummunication, but also can develop a growing number of new products which make us live better in the future.

Answer 2

写得真不错。

Answer 3

5G
The time of 5G technology is coming. Along with the development of the Internet (Internet前一般都需要加定冠词the), a growing number of things are depending on it.
The Internet is a sign of the technological age (技术时代）. In recent decades, AI and driverless vehicles (无人驾驶汽车）have been hot topics, which obviously proves that the Internet plays a vital role in it. Thanks to 5G, which is the catalyst of AI and driverless vehicles, both of them are experiencing huge changes. We can't help but believe that the transmission speed of 5G is 17 times than that of 4G. What an amazing speed!
The 5G age not only gives us the faster information communication tool, but also makes a growing number of technology products that will appear in the future.