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帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【书信】

Dear parents，
I miss you so，and hope everything goes well with you. Today I am writing to tell you something about my life here in Shenzhen.
As you know，I am so happy to visit Shenzhen again，great changes have taken place since my first visit 3 years ago. When mentioning Shenzhen, people never forget to speak of Huaqiang Road，it is a very busy commercial district，I often visit the IT digital shops there when I have spare time，sometimes I take a walk along the road in the morning at weekend； besides，there are many beautiful high-rise buildings there，which look very spectacular and gorgeous when the night approaches and streetlamps begin to light.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards.

Yours sincerely
Kim
好心人帮我翻译一下吧，这是我们的假期作业。。。

Answer 1

亲爱的父母，

我很想你们（I miss you so much？）/我也很想你们（ I miss you too？），并且希望你们一切顺利。今天我写信是要告诉你们一些关于我在深圳这里的生活。

正如你所知道的,我很高兴再次参观深圳。自从我三年前第一次参观这儿，深圳又发生了巨大的变化。当提到深圳,人们永远不会忘记华强路。这是一个非常繁忙的商业区，当我有闲暇时间时，我经常访问这的IT数码商店，有时在周末的早上，我也会沿着这条路走走；除此之外，还有许多美丽的高楼大厦,当夜幕降临而街灯开始发光时，它们看起来非常壮观与华丽。

我期待着你门的来信。

致以最诚挚的问候。

真诚的（感觉这里用 Your loving son/daughter 会好一点，因为是给爸妈写信）
Kim

另注：spectacular and gorgeous 可以用 magnificent 或者 splendid替代 这两个词难度低一点。