Question

求帮助改错！谢谢啦！！着急啊！！

Answer 1

一行一行的说吧。总体构思很好，文采不错，英文字体很流畅呀。下面是 给出的几点修改地方

1. a改为an excellent teacher

2. and also 需要改为 but also

4. adapt to the new

5. hard time 不是times

6. fail 改为failed

7. her 改为his

8. 连词therefore用的不是很准确吧。可以改为Besides

9.everyone 改为 every one,必须是分开的，只有every one of=each。

10.as 改为for，而且后面的them要去掉。

最后一句， one of the best teachers ，one of 后应加可数名词复数。句子最后的before应该去掉。

祝学习愉快呀~

Answer 2

a- an
and also- but also
adapt - adapt to
hardly- hard
fail- failed
Therefore- Besides
like- as
as- for
them去掉
teacher-teachers