Question

急求把下面这篇短文翻译成英文！！！！！！

不要翻译数字，也不要从网上翻译器翻译来的。

亲爱的妈妈：
很高兴你读这封信。段考结束了，第27的名词对于我来说还不错（not bad）。不过，仔细研究我的各科分数和试卷，还是能发现许多不足之处。例如，政治87分，历史81分，这样的成绩还是低了一点。政治有一道6分的题目，遗憾的是，我1分也没得。不是因为我不懂做，而是根本没弄清楚题目问的是什么。如果加上这6分，我的名词应该可以再上升5名。
这次考试，无论是我擅长的或不擅长的科目，都有一些不该被扣的分。从上次月考结束，我制定了一个学习计划，并与段考前十天开始实行。计划实行期间，我平均每天花费1.5~2.5小时复习。
段考结束后，我的成绩证明了我的学习方法还存在一些不足。与其他成绩好的同学相比，我在学习上花费的时间比较少。我必须多花费一些时间学习，并借鉴其他同学的学习经验，并结合自身实际情况，完善学习计划，才能学的更好。
我的期考目标是第10名。这个目标是经过认真研究后确定的。我也对每个科目明确了目标。要达到这个目标并不容易。我必须有三个科目（数学，英语，地理）得到班级最高分，把成绩一般的科目每科提高几分。然而，最难的是让成绩较差的科目分数进入到班级前列。
现在的我离这个目标还有一定距离，我需要付出更多时间，更多汗水，经历千难万险。只要我努力过，就算最后的结果是失败，也没什么丢脸的！

爱迪生说过：成功来自1％的天分和99％的努力。不过，这1％一定比99％更加重要！

Answer 1

Dear mom:
I'm glad you read this letter.Exam is over, 27 term for me is good, not bad).However, a careful study of my scores in all the subjects and the examination paper, or can find many shortcomings.87 points 87 points, for example, politics, history, it is still a little low.Politics have a six points of subject, unfortunately, I didn't have to 1 minute.Not because I do not understand, but didn't find out what is what.If add the 6 points, I 5 terms should be able to rise again.
This test, whether I am good at or not good at subjects, there are some of the points should not be.From the end of the monthly examination, I devised a study plan, and with the period of ten days before the start.During planning, on average, I spend 1.5 ~ 2.5 hours a day to review.
After the exam, my grades proved my learning method also has some shortcomings.Compared with other good students, I spend less time on study.I have to spend some more time to study, and draw lessons from other students learning experience, combined with their own actual situation, perfect the study plan, to learn better.
My goal is the 10th final examination.The goal is to determine after a careful study.I am clear about the goal of each subject.It's not easy to achieve this goal.I must have three subjects (math, English, geography) to get the highest class, increase the achievement general subjects every division.However, who are weak in the most difficult is to make the subject scores into to the top of the class.
Now I stay away from this goal, we still have some distance, I need to pay more time and more sweat, experience appears.As long as I try, even if the end result is a failure, also no shame!

Edison said: success is 1% talent and 1% perspiration.However, the 1% must be more important than 99%!Dear mom:
I'm glad you read this letter.Exam is over, 27 term for me is good, not bad).However, a careful study of my scores in all the subjects and the examination paper, or can find many shortcomings.87 points 87 points, for example, politics, history, it is still a little low.Politics have a six points of subject, unfortunately, I didn't have to 1 minute.Not because I do not understand, but didn't find out what is what.If add the 6 points, I 5 terms should be able to rise again.
This test, whether I am good at or not good at subjects, there are some of the points should not be.From the end of the monthly examination, I devised a study plan, and with the period of ten days before the start.During planning, on average, I spend 1.5 ~ 2.5 hours a day to review.
After the exam, my grades proved my learning method also has some shortcomings.Compared with other good students, I spend less time on study.I have to spend some more time to study, and draw lessons from other students learning experience, combined with their own actual situation, perfect the study plan, to learn better.
My goal is the 10th final examination.The goal is to determine after a careful study.I am clear about the goal of each subject.It's not easy to achieve this goal.I must have three subjects (math, English, geography) to get the highest class, increase the achievement general subjects every division.However, who are weak in the most difficult is to make the subject scores into to the top of the class.
Now I stay away from this goal, we still have some distance, I need to pay more time and more sweat, experience appears.As long as I try, even if the end result is a failure, also no shame!

Edison said: success is 1% talent and 1% perspiration.However, the 1% must be more important than 99%!

Answer 2

Dear mom:
Glad you read this letter.Monthly test is end,27th is not bad for me.But ,After study all of my subjects scores and papers found many deficiencies.For example,87 points, 81 points of history,however it is a little lower.One of the political topics is 6 points,but i got zero.What a pity.I can't understanding the topic clearly.My ranking should be able to rise up 5 if i got other 6 points.《第一段》

Now I have a certain distance from that goal.I need to pay more time, more sweat, experiencing hardships.《第四段》
Edison said:Success comes from 1% talent and 99% effort. However, this is certainly more important than 1% to 99%!《第五段》