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Miss Green was going to gine a lecture on Monday afternoon.
Yet on Sunday night she was told that she had to go to an important meeting the next dey at exactly the same time “NO one can be in two plecces at once what shell I do?”she thought. But
soon she had an idea
At five to three on Monday afternoon Miss Green went along to the lecture eoom. There were about twenty students waiting there for her “I'm sorry”she told them,“I won't he able to gine my lecture today.”The students looked surprised.Miss Green explained that she had an important meeting “However.”she went on.“although I can't be with you myself,my voice can!” she put a small tape recorded on the desk“You see I've recorded my lecture and you can listen to it without me.”Thinking that she had settled the matter, Miss Green turned on the recordev and left.
The meeting finished a little early .Miss Green decided to go back to her students . She stood for a moment outside the lecture room,listening to her own voice Then uey quietly,she opened the door.To her surprise,thetoom was empty.As she looked around,she sauo a numbre of small recotders-all“listening”toher lecture!
“Well,”she thought,“if I can be in two places at the same time,why can't they?”
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Answer 1

Miss Green was going to have a lecture on Monday afternoon.
Yet on Sunday night she was told that she had to go to an important meeting the next dey at exactly the same time as the lecture. “NO one can be in two plecces at once. What shell I do?”she thought, but soon she had an idea.
At five to three on Monday afternoon, Miss Green went along to the lecture room. There were about twenty students waiting there for her “I'm sorry”she told them,“I won't he able to gine my lecture today.”The students looked surprised. Miss Green explained that she had an important meeting “However.”she went on.“although I can't be with you myself,my voice can!” she put a small tape recorded on the desk“You see I've recorded my lecture and you can listen to it without me.”Thinking that she had settled the matter, Miss Green turned on the recordev and left.
The meeting finished a little early .Miss Green decided to go back to her students . She stood for a moment outside the lecture room,listening to her own voice Then uey quietly,she opened the door.To her surprise,the room was empty.As she looked around,she saw a numbre of small recorders-all“listening”toher lecture!
“Well,”she thought,“if I can be in two places at the same time,why can't they?”

Answer 2

Miss Green was going to have a lecture on Monday afternoon.
But on Sunday night she was told that she had to go to an important meeting the next day at exactly the same time “NO one can be in two plecces at the same time what shall I do?”she thought. But
soon she had an idea
At five to three on Monday afternoon Miss Green went along to the lecture room. There were about twenty students waiting for her “I'm sorry”she told them,“I won't be able to gine my lecture today.”The students looked surprised.Miss Green explained that she had an important meeting “However.”she went on.“although I can't be with you myself,my voice can!” she put a small tape recorded on the desk“You see I've recorded my lecture and you can listen to it without me.”Thinking that she had settled the matter, Miss Green turned on the recorder and left.
The meeting finished a little early .Miss Green decided to go back to her students . She stood for a moment outside the lecture room,listening to her own voice Then very quietly,she opened the door.To her surprise,the room was empty.As she looked around,she saw a number of small recotders-all“listening”to her lecture!
“Well,”she thought,“if I can be in two places at the same time,why can't they?”

Answer 3

Miss Green was going to have a lecture on Monday afternoon.However on Sunday night she was told that she had to attend an important meeting the next day at exactly the same time "Absolutely no one can be present in two places at the same time. What shall I do?”she thought. But soon an idea striked her mind.
At five to three on Monday afternoon Miss Green went to the lecture room. There was about twenty students awaiting her "I'm sorry”she told them,“I will not he able to give my lecture today.”The students looked surprise.Miss Green explained that she had an important meeting. “However.”she went on.“although I can't be with you myself,my voice can!” she put a small tape recorder on the desk“You see I've recorded my lecture and you can listen to it without me.”Thinking that she had settled the matter, Miss Green turned on the recorder and left.
The meeting ended a little early .Miss Green decided to return to her students . She stood for a moment outside the lecture room,listening to her own voice Then quietly,she opened the door.To her surprise,the room was empty.As she looked around,she saw a number of small recorders“listening”to her lecture!
“Well,”she thought,“if I can be in two places at the same time,why can't they?”