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短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误

短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（） 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today I showed some foreign friend around our city. We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a.m. We first got to Jiangnan Park. We are all struck by its beautiful flowers on show. Then, we visited the City Museum. We saw plenty of valuable things, from that we learned a lot about the city. After that, they drove to Bei Shan Park. That is a beautiful place of interest in our city, but there we enjoyed the wonderfully scenery of the lake. We had delicious lunch at the seafood restaurant and we returned back at noon. All the foreign friends were pleased with my arrangement. We did have the wonderful time today.

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小题1:friend改为friends 小题2:in改为by 小题3:are改为were 小题4:from that改为from which 小题5:they改为we 小题6:but改为and 小题7:wonderfully改为wonderful 小题8:delicious前加a 小题9:the改为a 小题10:去掉 back

小题1:前面有some,说明这里应该是复数形式; 小题2:乘坐小汽车使用介词by; 小题3:整个文章都是过去时； 小题4:定语从句中that一般不放在介词后面。 小题5:是我们一起去了Bei Shan Park。 小题6:上下文是顺接关系，不是转折关系。 小题7:后面的scenery是名词，应该用形容词修饰。 小题8:固定词组have a lunch. 小题9:这里是泛指，指一家海鲜餐馆。 小题10:return本身就用回来的意思不能与back连用。