Question

高中英语作文，希望指出错误并改正，谢谢！ 题目见上。

Answer 1

They gradually away from 这句没有谓语
that is your mistake 换成that's更好
companying with your family 这里company的用法错误，具体用法自己百度

I'm strongly convinced that companying with your family, your... 这里companying with your family是主语，本来要构成一个句子，可是你没有谓语和宾语

你可以去批改网去批改你的文章

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可是该怎么改呢？company with就是百度的

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keep sb. company(陪伴某人)
have one’s company(有某人的陪伴)
in company(结伴，一起)
in company with(与...一 起)
in the company of sb(由某人陪伴)
for company (陪着)

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我的意思是，你能不能，把错的改成对的呢？就是将你指出来的错误之处改成正确的，谢谢！

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要不你把你写的打字打出来吧，我帮你把错误改了，再帮你加一些高级句型

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As is indicated in the materical,nowadays,more and more people become netizens. What's more,they graually away form their family who are their loved ones.

form where I stand,looking thorough Internet is not worng . However,if the relationship between you and your family is loose, that is your mistake.

I'm strongly convinced that companying with your family, you will become happier.

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