Question

关于英语改错

Dear hang hui,
how is everything?the winter vacation is coming and 1._______
I have a plan with a trip.I'm writing to discuss it with you2.___
you can first come to beijing and we'll visit Great3.____
Wall.Then we'll fly to hainan province,where there4.______
we can get a beautiful view of the sea and tasty5._____
the seafood .I suggest we shall come back by train,6______
so we can stop at wuhan to see our grandmother.7_____
when we are back to beijing, I'd like you stay for8______
a few days with my families for the spring festival 9.___
How do you think of my idea?Please let me know.10_____
Best wishes，
yours
li jun

Answer 1

在everything后加going，习惯用法，老外经常说的
with改为about 关于
visit加at 小地点用at
去掉there 用where引导定语从句
tasty改为taste 应为动词
shall 改为 should suggest引导虚拟语气，用should
at改为in 大地点用in
you 后加 to would like to 固定
families改为family 做家人时，就用单数代指。
of改为about， 诶，我觉得两个都差不多，只是习惯不同罢了。
第一个与第十个题我不是十分确定，你再看一下，这题应该有一个是正确的吧。

Answer 2

1.大写。
2. no error
3。Great Wall...the Great Wall
4.删除 "there"
5 tasty...taste
6 删除"shall"
7 no error...绝不是at...by
8. back to...back in
9. i'd like you stay...i'd like you to stay & Families...family
10. how do you...what do you

Answer 3

1.the改为The
2.with改为about
3.Great Wall前加the
4.there去掉
5.tasty改为taste
6.shall改为should
7.at改为by
8.like后加to
9.families改为family
10.正确

Answer 4

1.√
2.with改为for
3.Great Wall前加the
4.there去掉
5.tasty改为taste
6.shall改为should
7.at改为in
8.you后加to
9.families改为family
10.How改为What