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A long time ago, the world's only God. God stand the loneliness, has created a new biological -----

people. God told the people to obey his orders, not defiance, to build temples, often dedicated to them,

were agreed. God satisfied sleeping.
In Atlantis, there was a king who ruled the entire continent. The king enjoyed all the good things

human, but always not satisfied. One day, he suddenly thought: "If I could go to a place where God lives

lived enough." Future thinking too, desire to tolerate, he thought, he has numerous military, even if

God should be afraid of. Greed overcame fear, he combined all the kingdoms, to lure them with sweet

talk. So they formed a coalition against God. Wanton destruction of their temples, all religious people,

all killed, all the way burning and looting, hit the holy resting place ---- the gods.
Around the cloud layer around the sacred mountain, from time to time have heard the voices of

birds, the environment is so peaceful and beautiful. King went to the throne of God, to do the above,

proud to say: "I am the world's most powerful god."
God is very angry, he used lightning, storm, flood attack force. Not long afterwards, the king and

his army would perish together, and the civilians also suffered God's anger. After the prince had heard,

it is angry, he was rushed to Sacred menacing. The foot of the sacred mountain, he saw his father's

body, he cried and said to his father, I will avenge you! He just about to go into one of his father's

body light beam, and then to a two-edged sword of. He picked up the sword, rushed to the Holy Mountain.

Of course, this can not escape God's discernment. God suddenly appeared in front of him, face him with a

scowl of said: "The man was wanted everything to kill his master it? Being the case, I will let humans

have it." Then he waved his staves, rushed up the ghost of numerous human, human suddenly became hell.

He went away satisfied, but forget he is still alive. Prince immediately took up the sword, pierce the

heart of God. God is dead. And therefore the other gods disappear suddenly become holy ground.
No one knows the Prince gone, people only know that God does not exist. Others said they had seen

God in the sky. Many years later, people will forget the existence of God. When disaster strikes, there

is always a mysterious man, carrying a sword, to a mysterious place, he their path, no longer a

disaster.
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Answer 1

很久以前，世界的唯一是上帝。上帝上帝立场寂寞，创造了一新生物 ----- 人们。上帝吩咐人们服从他的命令，在的基础上建立对他们常常献身的庙宇,不藐视 是商定的。以使上帝满意睡觉的。 在亚特兰蒂斯中，有一个统治整个大陆的国王。国王欣赏所有的好事情 并非人但是总是满意的。一天，他突然思考：“如果”我是，能“去”“那里”上帝“一”“居住”的地方 过足够。认为也容忍的愿望是他的未来认为他有许多军事即使 上帝将是的害怕。对的贪婪克服恐惧是他合并所有的王国用甜食吸引他们 和的谈话。那样他们形成一对着上帝的结合。他们的庙宇,所有的虔诚在的人们的放肆毁灭 完全杀死，一直燃烧和抢劫打击神圣安息的地方----神。 在在整个神圣山的云层周围，不时有一段时间听的声音 鸟,environme