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有没有英语学霸帮我改下这篇文章？高三英语改错，实在找不到哪错了，帮帮忙！必采纳！！在线等！！

有没有英语学霸帮我改下这篇文章？高三英语改错，实在找不到哪错了，帮帮忙！必采纳！！在线等！！总共有十处错，我还抄了一遍是因为原图很多人说很模糊，不想帮我了，
说明一下，写出第几行哪个词错了，然后加上改正后的词(单词没有拼错，错的是语法，人称，介词，等)

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Answer 1

1第一行thank改为thanks
2第二行in划去
3第三行after后面的come改成coming
4第三行found my purse leaving的leaving改为left
5第四行开头beautifully改为beautiful
6第五行第三个词which改成what
7第五行后半段look after改为look for
8第六行第一个逗号后面的return改为returned
9第六行最后一个逗号之前的kind改为kindness
10第十行what和name之间添加 his
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谢谢！！

Answer 2

I am writing to express my THANKS to your supermarket and your assistant.

I went shopping in your supermarket with my mother yesterday afternoon, Unfortunately, after COMING back home, I found my purse LEFT on the counter. It WAS a beautiful purse with 500 yuan and a shopping card in it. Owing to the shop assistant, I found WHAT I had lost immediately when I went back to look FOR it. He not only gave us the best service, but  RETURNED the purse he had found. I appreciate his KINDNESS, even though I don't know what HIS name is.

你划掉的in，加上加黑的9个。

下了心血的，不采纳对不起我。。

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谢谢！！