Question

科技英语翻译，正确吗？

（1）在较高湿度下，随着样品鲜重提高，含水率较大幅度降低，成活率也较大幅度提高。
At higher humidity, water content reduced greatly as well as survival rate substantial increased with the increase of fresh weight of sample .
（2）意思是：“含水率或成活率与湿度的相关系数、含水率或成活率与时间的相关系数都非常接近。”总共有4个相关系数，如下表达准确吗？谢
All the correls between water content or survival ratet and humidity or time were very close.

Answer 1

(1) At higher rate of humidity, the water content reduced greatly, and the survival rate increased substantially with the increase of the sample's fresh weight. [已更正]

(2)The correlations between water content or survival rate and humidity,and the correlations between water content or survival rate and the time were all very close. [已尽我所能去修]

注:(a) <相关系数>是单单 "correlations" 或 "correlation coefficiencies"? [参考Google翻译,并请更正.]

GOOD LUCK.

Answer 2

英文隔行如隔山，我不是这行的，只能说英文不对。

比如：a substantial increase/substantially increased

correls可能是口语的用法？

between A and B
between A and B or C and D好像不清楚。

进步提高。