英语四级作文
我的英文水平很差,但还是报考了23号的四级考试,我想问问各位,想我这样的怎么样才能确保在作文里拿到一些分,有什么经验或者技巧没?...
我的英文水平很差,但还是报考了23号的四级考试,我想问问各位,想我这样的怎么样才能确保在作文里拿到一些分,有什么经验或者技巧没?
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如何写好四六级英语作文(1)
Chapter One 文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,
适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people
say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others
argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth
in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged
that .... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .
e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/
aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...
has been brought into focus. ( has been braught to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the
new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ...
Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/
popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/
coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity
to......
Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea
that.......
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
e.g:
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark
has been shared by more and more people .
"Education is not complete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a
great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like theses
/this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as
this "......".
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.
e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh
look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now
share this new .
1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.
e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon of
... has aroused public concern.
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are
often confront with in our daily life.
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be
(unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
1-8 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.
e.g:
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...
But in my opinion , ...... .
如何写好四六级英语作文(2)
Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型
<一> 原因结果分析
3-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
e.g:
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing...
For another...... Still another ...
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect ....
/both individual and social contribute to ....
3-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
e.g:
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....
3-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .
e.g:
[1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
< 二 > 比较对照句型
3-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 !
e.g:
[1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages
we gain from B.
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.
[3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as
positive effects.
3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!
e.g:
[1]. A and B have several things in common.
They are similar in that.....
[2]. A bears some striking resemblances to B.
1.四六级专题之写作篇--写作必背之35句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句:
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:
Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句:
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
例句:
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
例句:
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)
例句:
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)
例句:
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won"t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
例句:
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)
例句:
So precious is time that we can"t afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)
例句:
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句:
The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..)
例句:
By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)
例句:
Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)
例句:
On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)
例句:
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)
例句:
Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)
例句:
There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
例句:
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句:
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)
例句:
Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don"t like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...)
例句:
For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:
Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)
例句:
It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以...为基础)
例句:
The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
例句:
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)
例句:
We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)
例句:
Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)
例句:
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~ (因为...)
例句:
Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句:
What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
例句:
The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ (对...有很大的影响)
例句:
Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to (对...有益),do harm to (对...有害)
例句:
Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)
例句:
Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one"s utmost to + V = do one"s best (尽全力去...)
例句:
We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
Chapter One 文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,
适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people
say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others
argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth
in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged
that .... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .
e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/
aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...
has been brought into focus. ( has been braught to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the
new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ...
Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/
popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/
coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity
to......
Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea
that.......
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
e.g:
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark
has been shared by more and more people .
"Education is not complete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a
great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like theses
/this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as
this "......".
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.
e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh
look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now
share this new .
1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.
e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon of
... has aroused public concern.
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are
often confront with in our daily life.
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be
(unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
1-8 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.
e.g:
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...
But in my opinion , ...... .
如何写好四六级英语作文(2)
Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型
<一> 原因结果分析
3-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
e.g:
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing...
For another...... Still another ...
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect ....
/both individual and social contribute to ....
3-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
e.g:
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....
3-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .
e.g:
[1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
< 二 > 比较对照句型
3-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 !
e.g:
[1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages
we gain from B.
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.
[3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as
positive effects.
3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!
e.g:
[1]. A and B have several things in common.
They are similar in that.....
[2]. A bears some striking resemblances to B.
1.四六级专题之写作篇--写作必背之35句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句:
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:
Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句:
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
例句:
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
例句:
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)
例句:
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)
例句:
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won"t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
例句:
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)
例句:
So precious is time that we can"t afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)
例句:
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句:
The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..)
例句:
By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)
例句:
Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)
例句:
On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)
例句:
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)
例句:
Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)
例句:
There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
例句:
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句:
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)
例句:
Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don"t like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...)
例句:
For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:
Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)
例句:
It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以...为基础)
例句:
The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
例句:
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)
例句:
We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)
例句:
Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)
例句:
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~ (因为...)
例句:
Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句:
What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
例句:
The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ (对...有很大的影响)
例句:
Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to (对...有益),do harm to (对...有害)
例句:
Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)
例句:
Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one"s utmost to + V = do one"s best (尽全力去...)
例句:
We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
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一、审题�
我们拿到作文后第一件事要做的就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题(如果跑题,条
理和语言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分。)那么审题要审什么呢?
�
1. 体裁 (议论文、说明文、描述文)
�
审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括
哪些呢?就四、六级考试而言,它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。从近些年来看,四、六级作文不
是单一的体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如有一次四级写题是这样出的:
Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a compos ition on the
topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at least 100 words and
you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:�
(1) 做合格大学生的必要性�
(2) 做合格大学生的必备条件(可以德智体等方面谈)
(3) 我打算这样做�
很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。我们认为说它是议论文是片面的。因为第一段要求写
“...必要性”,这说明本段体裁是议论文;第二段要求写“...必备条件”,这说明本段要求写说
明文;而第三段要求写“...这样做”,说明本段要求写的是描述文。所以我们说在大多数情况
下,四、六级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。
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2.根据不同体裁确定写作方法�
我们审题的目的就在于根据不同的体裁来确定不同的写作方法。通过审题,我们可以看出四、
六级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体、第二段为说明体、第三段为描述体。议论体有议
论体的写作方式、说明体有说明体的写作方式、描述体也有它自身的写作特点。第一段为议论文:
它的写作特点是要有论点和论据,而且往往从正反两面来论述。例如上面题目的第一段的写作思路
是:做合格大学生,会怎么样(这是从正面论述);不能做倒合格大学生,会怎么样(从反面论
述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结论)。第二段为说明文:它的写作特点是从几方面或几条来
说明一个问题,就跟某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途。就以上面的作文而言,我
们从三个方面(德智体)来说明做合格大学生的必要性。第三段为描述文:以“人”为中心描述一
个“做”的过程。跟上两段相比,本段的主语多为人称代词。它要与第二段相呼应进行描述。
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二、主题句
通过审题,我们知道了写作的思路。下边我们就谈怎么样写。第一步就是要写主题句。主题句
是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把各要求句译成
英语。例如上述作文的三段主题句分别为:�
It is very necessary to be a good university student.(议论体主题句)�
There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(
说明体的主题句)
What I will do in the future is the following.(描述题的主题句)
如果要求句是英语就可以把它扩充成主题句,例如这样的一篇做文:�
Good Health�
(1) Importance of good health�
(2) Ways to keep fit�
(3) My own practice�
这样的作文的要求句就可以扩展成主题句。扩展后三段的主题句分别为:�
1、It is very important to have good health. (将名词importance变成形容词
important)
2、There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)�
3、My own practices are the following.(采用原词)
�
三、条理�
保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务,第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反
面要清楚。对于说明文来说,1、2、3条要清楚,对于描述文要来,谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例
Good Health来说,第一段保持正反面要清楚就应这样写:主题句(I t is very important to
have good health.,正面(With good health, we can...),反面(Without good health, we
can do nothing. We can't do...)第二段应当这样写:主题句(There are four ways to keep
fit.) 从几方面说明:
Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should h
ave a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. A
nd fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to t
he music....)�
为了使文章更具关于条理性,我们可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副词,他们可以
使文章的条理性十分突出。作文是主观性题,要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师
的时间很短(每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列条条时最好不用:To
begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At
last ...。因为用这样的词语不利于阅卷老师看出你作文的条理性。�
第三段应当这样写:主题句(My own practices are the following.)具体情况(主语为第
一人称代词I,与第二段呼应) In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a
nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen
to the classic music.�
综上所述,如果我们按以上几节的方法去做,就可以保证及格以上分数。
�
四、 十二句作文法
在作文的评分标准中字数也是一个要求。四、六级的作文要求是要写出120-150字。对于这样
的要求考生不必怕写不够。我们知道,四、六级作文大都是三段式。我们算一下,如果我们在每一
段中写上四句话,即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右。每一
句十多个词,这样就是120-150字。同时,我们也提醒大家,不能写得太多,写得多容易跑题。在
写作时,我们要横向写作,即写某一问题的横段面。例如,上面讲到健康的重要性时,我们只写四
句就可以了。第一句主题句,第二句从正面论述,第三句从反面论述,第四句为结论句。但有的同
学在写的时候说“健康非常重要,”然后就写“吃波莱非常重要”,因为波菜含有丰富的铁,铁对
人是非常重要的,因为...。这样的作文的基本模式是A-B B-C C-D D-E以此类推。这就叫流水,没
有中心。我们写作时要根据横段面去写,而不要写成流水账。避免写成流水账的方法是不要就前一
句中的一个非重点词再进行描述。而要对主题句从横段面去写,写完一个横段面就不要再对这一横
段面进行阐述了,应当去写别一个横段面。如果我们感觉字数不够,就在每一句或某些句子上添加
些词词就行了。
例如我们感觉上边第二段不够长,就可以这样来加词:�
主题句There are four ways to keep fit.- There are four or more ways to keep fit for
everyone of us.
从几方面说明: Firstly, we should have our break fast in the morning.- Firstly, we
should have our breakfast, such as milk, eggs, bread and so on, in the morning.
Second, we should have a nap at noon.- Secondly, we should have a short nap, even 30
minutes, at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. - Thirdly,
sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in
the afternoon . And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by
listening to music. - And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening
by listening to both popular and classic music. �
这样一来,我们只要保持本句的主题不变加添一些次要词就能达到字数的规定标准
我们拿到作文后第一件事要做的就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题(如果跑题,条
理和语言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分。)那么审题要审什么呢?
�
1. 体裁 (议论文、说明文、描述文)
�
审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括
哪些呢?就四、六级考试而言,它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。从近些年来看,四、六级作文不
是单一的体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如有一次四级写题是这样出的:
Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a compos ition on the
topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at least 100 words and
you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:�
(1) 做合格大学生的必要性�
(2) 做合格大学生的必备条件(可以德智体等方面谈)
(3) 我打算这样做�
很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。我们认为说它是议论文是片面的。因为第一段要求写
“...必要性”,这说明本段体裁是议论文;第二段要求写“...必备条件”,这说明本段要求写说
明文;而第三段要求写“...这样做”,说明本段要求写的是描述文。所以我们说在大多数情况
下,四、六级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。
�
2.根据不同体裁确定写作方法�
我们审题的目的就在于根据不同的体裁来确定不同的写作方法。通过审题,我们可以看出四、
六级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体、第二段为说明体、第三段为描述体。议论体有议
论体的写作方式、说明体有说明体的写作方式、描述体也有它自身的写作特点。第一段为议论文:
它的写作特点是要有论点和论据,而且往往从正反两面来论述。例如上面题目的第一段的写作思路
是:做合格大学生,会怎么样(这是从正面论述);不能做倒合格大学生,会怎么样(从反面论
述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结论)。第二段为说明文:它的写作特点是从几方面或几条来
说明一个问题,就跟某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途。就以上面的作文而言,我
们从三个方面(德智体)来说明做合格大学生的必要性。第三段为描述文:以“人”为中心描述一
个“做”的过程。跟上两段相比,本段的主语多为人称代词。它要与第二段相呼应进行描述。
�
二、主题句
通过审题,我们知道了写作的思路。下边我们就谈怎么样写。第一步就是要写主题句。主题句
是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把各要求句译成
英语。例如上述作文的三段主题句分别为:�
It is very necessary to be a good university student.(议论体主题句)�
There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(
说明体的主题句)
What I will do in the future is the following.(描述题的主题句)
如果要求句是英语就可以把它扩充成主题句,例如这样的一篇做文:�
Good Health�
(1) Importance of good health�
(2) Ways to keep fit�
(3) My own practice�
这样的作文的要求句就可以扩展成主题句。扩展后三段的主题句分别为:�
1、It is very important to have good health. (将名词importance变成形容词
important)
2、There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)�
3、My own practices are the following.(采用原词)
�
三、条理�
保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务,第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反
面要清楚。对于说明文来说,1、2、3条要清楚,对于描述文要来,谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例
Good Health来说,第一段保持正反面要清楚就应这样写:主题句(I t is very important to
have good health.,正面(With good health, we can...),反面(Without good health, we
can do nothing. We can't do...)第二段应当这样写:主题句(There are four ways to keep
fit.) 从几方面说明:
Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should h
ave a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. A
nd fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to t
he music....)�
为了使文章更具关于条理性,我们可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副词,他们可以
使文章的条理性十分突出。作文是主观性题,要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师
的时间很短(每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列条条时最好不用:To
begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At
last ...。因为用这样的词语不利于阅卷老师看出你作文的条理性。�
第三段应当这样写:主题句(My own practices are the following.)具体情况(主语为第
一人称代词I,与第二段呼应) In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a
nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen
to the classic music.�
综上所述,如果我们按以上几节的方法去做,就可以保证及格以上分数。
�
四、 十二句作文法
在作文的评分标准中字数也是一个要求。四、六级的作文要求是要写出120-150字。对于这样
的要求考生不必怕写不够。我们知道,四、六级作文大都是三段式。我们算一下,如果我们在每一
段中写上四句话,即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右。每一
句十多个词,这样就是120-150字。同时,我们也提醒大家,不能写得太多,写得多容易跑题。在
写作时,我们要横向写作,即写某一问题的横段面。例如,上面讲到健康的重要性时,我们只写四
句就可以了。第一句主题句,第二句从正面论述,第三句从反面论述,第四句为结论句。但有的同
学在写的时候说“健康非常重要,”然后就写“吃波莱非常重要”,因为波菜含有丰富的铁,铁对
人是非常重要的,因为...。这样的作文的基本模式是A-B B-C C-D D-E以此类推。这就叫流水,没
有中心。我们写作时要根据横段面去写,而不要写成流水账。避免写成流水账的方法是不要就前一
句中的一个非重点词再进行描述。而要对主题句从横段面去写,写完一个横段面就不要再对这一横
段面进行阐述了,应当去写别一个横段面。如果我们感觉字数不够,就在每一句或某些句子上添加
些词词就行了。
例如我们感觉上边第二段不够长,就可以这样来加词:�
主题句There are four ways to keep fit.- There are four or more ways to keep fit for
everyone of us.
从几方面说明: Firstly, we should have our break fast in the morning.- Firstly, we
should have our breakfast, such as milk, eggs, bread and so on, in the morning.
Second, we should have a nap at noon.- Secondly, we should have a short nap, even 30
minutes, at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. - Thirdly,
sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in
the afternoon . And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by
listening to music. - And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening
by listening to both popular and classic music. �
这样一来,我们只要保持本句的主题不变加添一些次要词就能达到字数的规定标准
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经验和技巧是平时积累的,我也这方面的经验
写作与其他题没什么区别,都是英语嘛,要考试了,只好赶鸭子上架,最快的方法是:1、每天背一篇例文2、在英文歌曲的歌词里找最经典的来记唱,效果很好3、坚持写英文日记4、不懂的地方问老师或同学或上网查一下。这样的学习会很快提高你的作文水平,但你必须是一个不怕苦且能坚持的人
写作与其他题没什么区别,都是英语嘛,要考试了,只好赶鸭子上架,最快的方法是:1、每天背一篇例文2、在英文歌曲的歌词里找最经典的来记唱,效果很好3、坚持写英文日记4、不懂的地方问老师或同学或上网查一下。这样的学习会很快提高你的作文水平,但你必须是一个不怕苦且能坚持的人
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CET4/6试题中,有两个拉分最厉害的部分,一是听力题,一是作文题。,跟汉语作文的“起承转合”类似,英语作文其实也有固定模式,
我到那里一看,果然有五个模板,认真拜读一遍之后,不由得大吃二惊。第一惊的是:我们中国真是高手如林,多么复杂、困难的问题,都能够迎刃而解,实在佩服之极。第二惊的是:“八股文”这朵中国传统文化的奇葩,在凋谢了一百多年之后,竟然又在中华大地上重新含苞怒放,真是可喜可贺。
感慨之后,转入正题。这五个模板,在结构上大同小异,掌握一种即可,所以我从中挑选了一个最简单、最实用的,稍加修改,给各位介绍一下。这个模板的中文大意是:在某种场合,发生某种现象,并提供一些相关数据,然后列出这种现象的三个原因,并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因,最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。总的来说,利用这个模板写英语作文,是相当容易的,您只要将适当的内容,填写到对应的方括号中,一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。
Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].
为便于读者理解,我特意用这个模板,写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文,请您观摩一下。
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China's examinations / 中国的考场]. It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手]. Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主无知]. Besides, [hirers' indolence / 雇主懒惰]. The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 雇主迟钝]. To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to [hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打]. On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].
我到那里一看,果然有五个模板,认真拜读一遍之后,不由得大吃二惊。第一惊的是:我们中国真是高手如林,多么复杂、困难的问题,都能够迎刃而解,实在佩服之极。第二惊的是:“八股文”这朵中国传统文化的奇葩,在凋谢了一百多年之后,竟然又在中华大地上重新含苞怒放,真是可喜可贺。
感慨之后,转入正题。这五个模板,在结构上大同小异,掌握一种即可,所以我从中挑选了一个最简单、最实用的,稍加修改,给各位介绍一下。这个模板的中文大意是:在某种场合,发生某种现象,并提供一些相关数据,然后列出这种现象的三个原因,并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因,最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。总的来说,利用这个模板写英语作文,是相当容易的,您只要将适当的内容,填写到对应的方括号中,一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。
Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].
为便于读者理解,我特意用这个模板,写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文,请您观摩一下。
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China's examinations / 中国的考场]. It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手]. Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主无知]. Besides, [hirers' indolence / 雇主懒惰]. The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 雇主迟钝]. To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to [hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打]. On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].
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你先把书本上的单词通记一下,复习一下相关教材
注意不要只是看那些阅读的东西,看看怎么快速阅读最重要,做题目的时候先看题目问的是什么然后在文中找你要的信息就行了,归纳的语言并不多!
你先把书本上的单词通记一下,复习一下相关教材
注意不要只是看那些阅读的东西,看看怎么快速阅读最重要,做题目的时候先看题目问的是什么然后在文中找你要的信息就行了,归纳的语言并不多!
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