my last school trip(三篇。有要求)

MyLastSchoolTrip(1)Ihadapleasantschooltriplastweekend._______________________________... My Last School Trip(1)
I had a pleasant school trip last weekend.________________________
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My Last School Trip(2)
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So we had a terrible school trip.
My Last School Trip(3)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________but luckily,___________________________
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My Last School Trip(1)
*I had a pleasant school trip last weekend.* I had been very excited for this trip. We have been to XXX. There was a play field. I played Merry-go-round, roller coaster and so on. I have eaten XXX.It tasted fabulous.
I will remember this memory forever

My Last School Trip(2)
We have been to XXX. I was excited about it and planned a lot.Unfortunatly, there was a typhoon come to XXX, We should stay at the hotel. Watching the boring TV. The planning we had planned, has been canceled.
*So we had a terrible school trip.*

My Last School Trip(3)
We have been to XXX. I was so pleased that I can't fall asleep the night before my lasy school trip. However, XXX was rainy. If it keep raining, we must stay at the hotel.But luckily, two hours later, the sun was shining. I could go out to play!
I had a great fun in XXX

“xxx”代表去的地方(胡乱写就行)
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2010-08-07
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作文要结合自己的生活经历来写才能吸引人
我也不提倡抄袭以及代写
不过我是非常乐意给你提些建议的
首先My last school trip从题目上看 是记叙文
从文体性质上看,需要用到的副词类应该是表示时间、地点、次序的
比如at first,then,finally,just at that moment,as soon as,during以及when引导的状语从句
从记叙事件上看,这是一篇游记,要讲述谁什么时间去什么地方怎么样干什么
事件总是有转折起伏的,所以要用到however,besides,what's more,to make things worse表示转折、顺承的短语,同时引入作者观点
从文章的基调上看,第一篇是“pleasant”,第二篇“terrible”,第三篇中间出现由坏转好的“but luckily”,那么在事件的安排上也要体现出符合这种情绪变化的事件。
适当运用各种从句、强调句、独立主格、with复合结构以及课本中的短语句式,再加上工整漂亮的书写,就已经可以算是篇不错的英语作文了。
祝你学习进步。
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2010-08-04
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这是要写三篇作文?
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2010-08-18
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