Question

英语翻译问题！！！！急！！英语大神进！！

这是我自己翻译的。。。肯定有很多错误，所以急求大神来纠正。。。
看一下我的翻译有没有问题。。。如果有的话帮我改正一下。。。或有什么更好的意见也可以提一下

中文：你们非常优秀！！我希望你们能够实现自己的梦想和更加进步。我会支持你们！！！中国歌迷等着你们来中国。我相信你们会成为最好的乐队。

英文：You are very good! ! I hope you can dreams come ture and even better one. I will support you! ! ! Chinese fans are waiting for you to come to China. I believe you will be the best band.

Answer 1

楼主已经把基本意思都翻出来了哈，如果完善一下的话可以翻成：

You are excellent! I hope you can live up to your dreams and make greater achievements! I'm for you. Chinese fans are expecting your visit to China. I believe that you will be one of the best bands in the world.

Answer 2

you are quite outstanding!I hope you can realise you dream and make more progress! I will always support you.We chinese fans are waiting for you to come and I believe you will be the best band!
英语里面的说别人good不是好的意思，而是不坏、凑合的意思。
实现梦想：realise one‘s dream
取得进步make progress

Answer 3

You are excellent! ! Hope your dreams will come ture and get even better progress. I will support you for ever! ! ! Chinese fans are waiting for your visiting China. I believe you will be the best band.

Answer 4

You are very excellent! ! I hope your dreams will come ture and be even better. I will support you! ! ! Chinese fans will be waiting for you to come to China. I believe you will be the best band
我不是大婶,请参考

Answer 5

You are very excellent! I hope you will realize your dream and go on. I will support you always! ! ! Chinese fans are waiting for you to come to China. I believe you will be the best band.

Answer 6

YOU ARE VERY EXCELLENT !I HOPE YOUWILL REALIZE YOUR DREAM AND ANDVANCE YOUSELF !I WILL SUPPORTYOU !!!CHINA FANS WELCOME YOU TO CHINA !I BELIEVE YOU WILL BE THE BEST BAND!