Question

英文翻译请教大家

中文: 请您来参加我公司的电工钢板工程竣工典礼
这样翻译行不行:Request the honor of your presence at the Completion Ceremony of Electrical Steel work

Answer 1

不错，不过这样可能更好。将 “我公司的电工钢板工程竣工典礼”译为：my company's electrical steel project completion ceremony

Answer 2

Please come to my company's electrical steel project completion ceremony

Answer 3

Would you please come to my company's electrician steel project completion ceremony

Answer 4

Welcome to attend the completion ceremony on electrical steel project of our company.