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全球金融危机的爆发暴露了信用评级业监管的滞后与不足，在此次危机中需要重新审视信用评级业监管中存在的问题，通过对信用评级监管的调整，规范信用评级机构的行为，促进信用评级业重新发挥其金融风险防范的功能。我国是信用评级发展的新兴国家，信用评级业正在形成的过程中，国外信用评级监管存在的问题给我国以极大的警示，我国应吸取此次教训，建立科学的信用评级监管制度，保障我国信用评级业的健康发展。

Answer 1

全球金融危机的爆发暴露了信用评级业监管的滞后与不足，在此次危机中需要重新审视信用评级业监管中存在的问题，通过对信用评级监管的调整，规范信用评级机构的行为，促进信用评级业重新发挥其金融风险防范的功能。
The outbreak of the global financial crisis has exposed that the supervision for credit rating industry is lagging behind and insufficient. The existing problems in the credit rating industry are in dire needs of reexamination in this crisis; it is imperative to gear up the credit rating industry and take up the slack on the functions of guarding against financial risks by readjusting the relevant supervision and regulating the actions of credit rating agencies.

我国是信用评级发展的新兴国家，信用评级业正在形成的过程中，国外信用评级监管存在的问题给我国以极大的警示，我国应吸取此次教训，建立科学的信用评级监管制度，保障我国信用评级业的健康发展。
China is a newly emerging nation of credit rating development; it is in the progress of formulating its credit ratings. The existing problems in the credit rating industry abroad are grave warnings for China; we must draw useful lessons from it, and establish a scientific credit rating regulatory regime to safeguard the sound development of China’s credit rating industry.

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Answer 2

The global financial crisis exposed the credit ratings, the lag and supervision on the crisis to re-examine the credit ratings, existing problems in the regulation on the supervision by credit rating adjustments, regulating credit rating agencies, promote credit ratings financial risk to exert its function. The development of China's credit rating in emerging countries, credit ratings are forming process, foreign credit rating regulatory problems for China with great caution, China should learn from the lessons of the credit rating, establish a scientific system of supervision, safeguard the healthy development of our country's credit ratings.
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Answer 3

The whole world financial crisis outburst has revealed lagging and deficiency that the credit rating job oversees , has needed to scan the credit rating job again overseeing middle have problem in this crisis, by the adjustment overseeing to credit rating, standard credit rating organization behavior, boosts the credit rating job bringing the function that whose financial risks keeps watch into play again. Our country is the newly-emerging nation that credit rating develops , credit rating oversees have problem abroad give our country extremely large warning , our country should absorb this lesson , builds the science credit rating regulatory system , ensures our country credit rating job health developing in the process that the credit rating job forms in course of

Answer 4

The global financial crisis exposed the credit ratings, the lag and supervision on the crisis to re-examine the credit ratings, existing problems in the regulation on the supervision by credit rating adjustments, regulating credit rating agencies, promote credit ratings financial risk to exert its function. The development of China's credit rating in emerging countries, credit ratings are forming process, foreign credit rating regulatory problems for China with great caution, China should learn from the lessons of the credit rating, establish a scientific system of supervision, safeguard the healthy development of our country's credit ratings

Answer 5

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The break of the global financial crisis exposed lag and shortage of the credit rating industry supervision.In this crisis,we need to re-examine the problems in credit rating industry supervision.By adjusting the credit rating industry supervision,we regulate the behavior of credit rating agencies and promote the credit re-rating industry to replay its function of Preventing the financial risks. China is a country which develop the credit rating.In the process of credit rating industry being formed,the problems in foreign credit rating supervision give a tremendous warning to China. China should learn the lesson and set up a scientific system for credit rating supervision,so that to protect the healthy development of credit rating industry in our country