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Fang Tong is 34 years old，an actor，director and teacher of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen.He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in.He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing.Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing0For his opinion，actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but peopel can never be back to it...So art is always changing and developing.

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Answer 1

Fang Tong is 34 years old，an actor，director and teacher of China and have(改为has) come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen.He hopes (加to)create an environment for his students that it（去掉it） is much more relaxing than the one he（改为they） used to study in.He thought（改为thinks） that an actor should relax himself when performing.Yet his students deep（改为deeply） respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing（改为heard）For（改为on） his opinion，actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but（去掉but） peopel can never be back to it...So（改为because） art is always changing and developing.