Question

求一篇英语的自我介绍，马上，十万火急……

我是一名即将上初中的学生，现在我要上的学校要我们写一篇英语的自我介绍，初中水平，别太难也别太简单，谢谢，要符合实际。详细资料---如：姓名、年龄、兴趣爱好等用xxx代替即可。要一遍中文翻译。注：一定要写出我的毕业学校！！！！！！（丰台五小）
不要太短

Answer 1

Hi！My name is xxx.I am a xxx(填性格+性别）.I am a xxx（填在班里的职务）. I am xx (填年龄） years old. I graduated from xxx（填小学名） primary school. I am from China. I live in xxx（填居住城市）.It is a beautiful city. My favorite sport is xxx（填喜欢的运动).xxx(填喜欢的颜色） is my favorite colour. My favorite subject is xxx（填喜欢的科目）. xxx（填偶像） is my idol. Because xxx（填喜欢偶像的理由）.I can speak chinese and English. I want to be a/an xxx（填理想职业） .
That is the end of my introduction.Thanks!
你好！我的名字是xxx。我是一位xxx。我是一个xxx。我xxx岁。我毕业于xxx小学。我来自中国。我居住在xxx。这是个漂亮的城市。我最喜欢的运动是xxx。xxx是我最喜欢的颜色。我最喜欢的科目是xxx。xxx是我的偶像。因为xxx。我会说汉语和英语。我想当一名xxx。
以上是我的自我介绍。谢谢！

Hellow！My name is ***,I graduated from fengtai Fifth elementary school.
I am a lively boy/girl,I am ** year old ,I like play****(basketball/table tennis)very much.My favorite color is****.That's all about me.I hope we can become a good friends.Thank you .
大家好!我的名字是***，我的毕业学校是丰台第五小学.
我是个活泼的男孩/女孩，我**岁了我非常喜欢打**（篮球/桌球 ）我喜欢的颜色是***，这些就是我的基本资料，我希望能和你们成为好朋友，谢谢

Hello, everybody:
First of all, thank you give me this interview!
My name is xxx, xx year old, graduated from the University of xxxx xxxx professional, in college, I not only pay more attention to the importance of knowledge accumulation ability. Has worked as a learning and active participation of members and monitor the various community activities inside homes, not only through the exercise of these activities, the language of my ability to cultivate my ability to organize and coordinate the group made me realize the power of the spirit of cooperation so I won the trust of teachers and students and praise. I not only attach importance to focus more on school ability to accumulate practical experience. Year in 2007,2008 and 2009, the school has to **, ** School ** School practiced by three years of teaching experience gained not only greatly enriched my professional skills into the work I laid more solid foundation. Overall, I think of you I was fully in line with the requirements of recruiting for this position. I fully believe that you can work this job!

Answer 2

Hellow！My name is ***,I graduated from fengtai Fifth elementary school.
I am a lively boy/girl,I am ** year old ,I like play****(basketball/table tennis)very much.My favorite color is****.That's all about me.I hope we can become a good friends.Thank you .
大家好!我的名字是***，我的毕业学校是丰台第五小学.
我是个活泼的男孩/女孩，我**岁了我非常喜欢打**（篮球/桌球 ）我喜欢的颜色是***，这些就是我的基本资料，我希望能和你们成为好朋友，谢谢

自我介绍别太长 会给人很反感的

加了点 该写的都加了
如果不够 再说

Answer 3

那个前面两个的都还行，你可以综合一下。不过不要用太多的I am 的句型。这样的最好不超过三句。
然后，应该是I hope we can become good friends.Thank you .再加一句that is all

Answer 4

Hello, everybody:
First of all, thank you give me this interview!
My name is xxx, xx year old, graduated from the University of xxxx xxxx professional, in college, I not only pay more attention to the importance of knowledge accumulation ability. Has worked as a learning and active participation of members and monitor the various community activities inside homes, not only through the exercise of these activities, the language of my ability to cultivate my ability to organize and coordinate the group made me realize the power of the spirit of cooperation so I won the trust of teachers and students and praise. I not only attach importance to focus more on school ability to accumulate practical experience. Year in 2007,2008 and 2009, the school has to **, ** School ** School practiced by three years of teaching experience gained not only greatly enriched my professional skills into the work I laid more solid foundation. Overall, I think of you I was fully in line with the requirements of recruiting for this position. I fully believe that you can work this job!