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谁能帮我翻译一下？（需要地道的英文）

我爸爸马上要去澳洲旅游了，我想让他帮我带化妆品，但老爸完全不了解行情，也不会挑便宜的，所以我要写封信给他带上，哪位高手帮我翻译一下，最好纯正一点,信的内容如下：

你好，美丽的，可爱的Ba小姐：

这次我爸爸去澳洲，想让他帮我带回来一些免税而且又比国内便宜的化妆品和护肤品，你能帮他推荐一些价格适中，性价比很高的产品么？

听说澳州本土有一些品牌比如说Jurlique,perfect potion，AESOP之类，最近有没有打折的呢？据说绵羊油又便宜又好用，可以推荐一些么？

另外，想带一些香水比较中意这几款daviduff的echo和coolwater，ysl的baby doll，STELLA ROSE ABSOLUTE，最好有小礼盒包装的。

最后非常感谢你的帮助，如果能尽量多送我爸爸一些小样或试用装那就再好不过了，祝你永远年轻美丽！
谢谢下面的朋友，修改后这样可以么？Hi, pretty Ms.BA,

My dad is coming to Autrilia, and I'd like him to bring some cosmetics which are tax-free and cheaper than those in China. Would you recommend him some products at
proper prices?

It is said that there are some nice local brands in Autralia, such as Jurlique, perfect potion, AESOP, and so on, and I'm wondering if they are on any discount recently. I also heard that Lanolin is nice and cheap, and I would appreciate if you can recommend some of them.

Besides, I'd like my dad to bring back two or three bottles of the perfume listed as followed: Daviduff's Echo and Coolwater, YSL's Baby doll, Stella rose absolute. It would be nice if it is with a giftwrapping box.

I appreciate your help. And it would be great if you can give my dad any samples. Wish you beauty forever.

Answer 1

Hi, pretty Ms.Ba,
my dad is coming to Autrilia, and I'd like him to bring some cosmetics which are tax-free and cheaper than in China. Would you recommend him some products at proper prices?
It is said that there are some nice local brands in Autralia, such as Jurlique, perfect potion, AESOP and so on, and I'm wondering if they are on any discount recently. I also heard that Lanolin is nice and cheap, and I would appreciate if you can recommend some.
Besides, I'd like my dad to bring some perfume, too. Comparatively, I am fond of Daviduff's Echo and Coolwater, YSL's Baby doll, Stella rose absolute. It would be nice if it is with a giftwrapping box.
I appreciate your help. And it would be great if you can give my dad any samples. Wish you beauty forever.

自己随便译的,可能不够地道,请笑纳~

改成那样也可以啊,差不太多,香水的那句主要看你自己要表达的意思啦