Question

帮我检查一下英语作文，语法错误什么的 十万感激

作文题目：假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的英国朋友tom非常喜欢中国的传统文化，想到你的学校来学习一年的汉语，请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

一 介绍你的学校：1 百年历史 2 48个教学班 ，300多名教职工 3 坐落在山脚下，一条小河穿过校园。
二 他将面临的困难或问题 1 语言障碍 2 思乡
三 你的建议
已给出开头： i ‘m very glad to hear that you are coming to our school to learn chinese for a year.here i'll intorduce our school first.
正文： xin hua senior school,has a history more than 100 years, with 48 classrooms and about 300 wonderful teachers, where near the mountain and with a river across it.
i know you are crazy about chinese culture,but you will also visit some matters that could be a barrier , which includes you will have difficulty in talking with others and miss your homeland.in order to solve these problems,you should spend more time on practicing chinese language. as the old saying goes,'the used key is always bright.' more practice,you will success eventually. at the same time,you could often write letter to your relatives so that make them know your conditions in china.i'm forward to your coming, reply to me soon,

有与今天下午学校突然放假了，所以问不成老师了，但是求路过的一定要帮我判一下啊，无论神马细小语法错误都不放过啊！不要怕打击我 （已判高考作文的严谨）由于某种原因所以大小写就不要算错误了

Answer 1

新华学校的xin hua 要大写，senior后面还要加个high才是高中的意思 Xin Hua senior high school
xin hua senior school后面不对，要么去掉逗号，要么在它后一句加一个which
第一段最后一句应该是which因为指代的是学校，还有应该是with a river acrossing it
more practice,you will success eventuall应该是With more practice,you will success eventuall
could often write letter to your relatives to make them 应该是这样
改改是一篇很不错的作文（上面一条一处错误）
希望能够帮助你

Answer 2

xin hua senior school,has a history more than 100 years, with 48 classrooms and about 300 wonderful teachers, where near the mountain and with a river across it.

第一句很别扭的，你没必要为了弄长难句而写这种句子。可以这样：Xinhua Senior School- an excellent school with history of more than 100 years- is armed with 48 classrooms and 300 wonderful teachers. It is near a mountain with a river across it.
spend more time in doing sth with more practice so that they are able to know

Answer 3

你没有错，我看过了。只是开头废话太多，简单概括一点。

Answer 4

开头的最后一句