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Harmfulness of Fake Products
Nowadays,the world became more and more small and there are so rich profucts in the market. You can buy everything just you like,even do not go out home.Unlikely,the fake proucts is also show grequently.The fake proucts is so harmful of peopleˊs health.Such as drug,correct drug will cure our trouble,even in sonetimes save our life,but the fake will kill us or do nothing.The fake products is around us,what can we do to avoid it?The best way is to the regulsr store to buy it, the goverment should strict laws should be gormulated and engorced against fask products.

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Nowadays,the world is becoming more and more small and there are so rich profucts in the markets. We almost can buy everything as long as we want and like ,even without leaving home .Unfortunately the fake proucts is also increasingly familiar.The fake proucts is harmful to human beings' health.Such as drug,correct drug will cure our illness,save our life,but the fake ones will do nothing, even kill us.The fake products are around us.Then what can we do to avoid it?The best way is to the regular store to buy what we want , the goverment should enact strict laws to against fake products,

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