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Amanworkedveryhardeverydaysothathisfamilywillliveabetterlife.Unfortunate,hediedveryyo... A man worked very hard every day so that his family will live a better life.Unfortunate,he died very yough,at age of40.Afer he died,he was sure be would go to Heaven bease of he worked so hard for his family.Therefore,he was stopped at the gate to Heaven and was tlod he should go to Hell."Why?"he asked,confusing."Look at your family!They're all in great sad now because of your death.You didn't value your health.People like them can't go to Heaven."Hear that,the man became silent and realized he should have valued his heslth.His family needed him less than they needed money. 展开
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mizunokun
2014-12-18
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  1. A man worked very hard every day so that his family will live a better life.此句前后时态不统一,will改成would

  2. Unfortunate,he died very yough,at age of 40. Unfortunate应该用副词形式Unfortunately, young拼错成yough,最后的词组漏了the,应该是at the age of 40

  3. Afer he died,he was sure be would go to Heaven bease of he worked so hard for his family.  After,because拼错;he was sure be would……这里的be应该是he吧,不知道是打错了还是确实就是要改的错;because of后面不跟从句,删掉of

  4. Therefore,he was stopped at the gate to Heaven and was tlod he should go to Hell.
    连词不对,应该是转折关系的However;told拼错

  5. "Why?"he asked,confusing.
    confusing是形容词,修饰从此用副词形式confusingly

  6. They're all in great sad now because of your death.
    词组是in great sadness

  7. People like them can't go to Heaven.
    不知道算不算错,但前面一句讲的是you,这句里变成了them,怪怪的

  8. Hear that,the man became silent and realized he should have valued his heslth.
    开头应该是动名词结构Hearing that;health拼错了

  9. His family needed him less than they needed money.

    根据文章的意思,应该是more than而不是less than


虽然编号写了9个,但算上不知道是打错的还是本来就拼错的地方,已经不止十个错误了

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  1. will-could/ 

  2. Unfortunate-Unfortunately

  3. at age of- at the age of

  4. bease of - because

  5. Therefore- However

  6. confusing- confused

  7. in great sad- in great sadness

  8. People like them-People like you

  9. Hear that,- Hearing that,

  10. less-more

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