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请仔细阅读下面所给的英文信，然后给Worried写一封回信。Dear Helpful,I’m a middle school student and

请仔细阅读下面所给的英文信，然后给Worried写一封回信。Dear Helpful,I’m a middle school student and I’m in trouble. I used to like English, but now I have some difficulty in English, especially in English writing. Though I know English is a very important subject, I think now it is too difficult for me. You know I have got poor results in English tests many times because my writing is poor. I wonder why so many students like English and can get good results in English tests. I do want to be one of the best students and go to a famous university after graduation. But my English is not good enough. What should I do?Worried 回信包含以下内容：1. 要有自信心；2. 多记一些惯用词组 (set phrases) 和句型结构 (sentence structures)，多造句；3. 大量阅读可以提高写作水平； 4. 多背诵一些好的短文；5. 写日记是提高写作的好方法； 6. 要经常练习。要求：1.至少写出五项内容； 2.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，词数100—120左右。Dear Worried,I have received your letter and I’m glad to give you some suggestions._______________________________________________________________________________ Follow your dream and you’ll find success is just around the corner!Good luck to you in your writing.

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Dear Worried, I have received your letter and I’m glad to give you some suggestions. First of all, don’t be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do several things. To begin with, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and make some sentences with them. And, in order to write well, you must learn to read much, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills. Besides, you’d better recite some good passages, where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions. What’s more, keeping a diary is an effective way. You can have a try without delay and it’s necessary to practice writing as often as possible. Follow your dream and you’ll find success is just around the corner! Good luck to you in your writing. Helpful

本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作。原文是一位在英文写作方面遇见困难的学生在寻求帮助。回信的要点都已经给了出来，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，如to begin with首先；besides而且；what’s more等。也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采。在词汇的运用上也要注意，使用相对高级的词汇提升文章的档次。 点评：在完成提纲类作文的时候，务必要注意不要遗漏要点。同时注意对要点的连接，使之成为一个整体。