求助，我写的四级英语作文 看看有什么错误 帮忙搞下 谢谢
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Nowadays ,more and more people are in lovewith online shopping. It not only makes people’s life more convenient, but alsocut the cost of traditional shopping.
Online shopping is appealing to people whodon’t want to go outside. In fact , shoppers can just click the mouse and getwhatever they want immediately .It’s a new shopping trend. Compared with shopsaround us, lower price really is a competitive advantage to attract people whois not enthusiastic about bargaining.
As every coin has two sides, it also hasweaknesses .Firstly, the goods online aren’t always what they actually are inreality. People may feel upset to receive something different from what theywant. Secondly, even if the most experienced buyer can never avoid gettingcheated when shopping online.
In my point of view, apart from all thosedisadvantages I still reckon that it is a good way for shopping. And with theadvancing of our society, to shop online may become part of the modern life toa large extent.
改过了，帮你改了一些，用词和结构也改动了一些。给你一个小建议，你的作文用词有点简单，希望平时多积累一些~
Online shopping is appealing to people whodon’t want to go outside. In fact , shoppers can just click the mouse and getwhatever they want immediately .It’s a new shopping trend. Compared with shopsaround us, lower price really is a competitive advantage to attract people whois not enthusiastic about bargaining.
As every coin has two sides, it also hasweaknesses .Firstly, the goods online aren’t always what they actually are inreality. People may feel upset to receive something different from what theywant. Secondly, even if the most experienced buyer can never avoid gettingcheated when shopping online.
In my point of view, apart from all thosedisadvantages I still reckon that it is a good way for shopping. And with theadvancing of our society, to shop online may become part of the modern life toa large extent.
改过了，帮你改了一些，用词和结构也改动了一些。给你一个小建议，你的作文用词有点简单，希望平时多积累一些~
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benefit and challenge of online shopping
Today many people started to try online shopping. Not only it make life convenient, but also
benefit and challenge of online shopping
Today many people started to try online shopping. Not only it make life convenient, but also
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Reduce the price of products.
Online shopping appeals to people who don't like to shop outside; infact who just want to stay at home using the convenient of the internet to do so. It a new from of trade, comparing to the old face to dace trading before us. The price of online shopping are somewhat cheaper and more comparing between products, so people like to use it.
But every coin has two side, online shopping has its weakness, firstly the products are not alway as good as the picture you in the internet. Also customer never knew the condition of the product until they get it on delivery, unlike like hand to hand trading,
In my opinion i do consider its a useful method for new style of shopping. Also it support our
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