Question

一道GMAT 语法题

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives[/u], capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, care-fully coordinating them with her narratives
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives,Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
答案是C，E为什么不对？

Answer 1

E的问题是them没有对应的指代。

“in her book illustrations”是地点装语，“with her narratives and capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world”是方式状语，都不是句子主干。

所以当提取句子主干的时候，整句话就会变成：Beatrix Potter coordinated them.，而这个“them”是什么，整句话都没有说，这样就产生了表达上的模糊。

原句的意思是“Beatrix Potter通过她的故事，写出了她对大自然的细致观察和热爱。”

Answer 2

能不能说说到底要考什么内容啊

Answer 3

Read the original sentence in the following way:

Beatrix Potter capitalzed on her observation and love in book illustrations that were coordinated with narratives.