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1.The train runs in a speed of 70 miles an hour when it crosses the desert.
2.It is not rare in 90s that people in their fifties are going to university for further education.
3.She can’t help cleaning the house because she’s busy making a cake.
4.The girl is so shy that she never speaks until speaking to.
5.Many of his articles are good thought of and people love to read them.
6.The pupils became quiet right away as their teacher rose his voice in anger.
7.In some parts of London,missing a bus means to wait for another hour.
8.He often thought of his childhood when he spent with his grandma in that poor village.
9. Mr Smith apologized to the children to the lady for what they had done.
10.Is this the store who sells clothes?
谢谢各位了.最好有答案有讲解.

Answer 1

.The train runs at a speed of 70 miles an hour when it crosses the desert.
以。。速度， 固定用法， at... speed
2.It is not rare in the 90s that people in their fifties were going to university for further education.
在。。。年代， 用the 90s, 时态不一致。
3.She can’t help clean the house because she’s busy making a cake.
can't help doing 请不自禁， 不能帮助做。。can't help do sth
4.The girl is so shy that she never speaks until spoken to.
是别人与女孩讲话， 应该是be spoken to, 但是， 时间状语从句中， 从句和主句主语一致， 有系动词，可以省略主语和系动词。
5.Many of his articles are well thought of and people love to read them.
good 是形容词， 不能修饰动词， 只能用WELL.
6.The pupils became quiet the moment their teacher rose his voice in anger.
这里没有硬伤， 但是， 用法不够地道。 right away 和as 有矛盾。
7.In some parts of London,missing a bus means waiting for another hour.
mean to do 是想要做。。。。， mean doing 是意味着。。。。
8.He often thought of his childhood that he spent with his grandma in that poor village.
childhood是定于从句中的宾语， 不能用关系副词。 要用关系代词来代替。
9. Mr Smith apologized for the children to the lady for what they had done.
是代替孩子们向老人道歉， 所以要改成for
10.Is this the store which/that sells clothes?
store在从句中做主语， 要用关系代词。 是定于从句中的主语。

Answer 2

1. in a → with the
with a speed of 以……的速度。介词用错。

2. are → were。
时态错。90年代五十多岁的人们上大学深造并不罕见，应用过去式。

3. cleaning→to clean。
can't help doing 意为禁不住做某事，此句意为：她不能帮忙打扫房间因为她在忙着做蛋糕。故应用to do 不定式。

4. speaking→being spoken。
语态错。别人主动给女孩说话，女孩是被动的，故应用被动语态。

5. good→well。
“留有好印象，被看好”，修饰动词词组think of 应用副词，故good应改为well。

6. rose→raised。
提高嗓门应用及物动词raise，骑过去式为raised。rose为不及物动词rise的过去式，意为升起。

7. to wait→waiting
mean to do意为打算做某事，mean doing意味着。句意：在伦敦一些地方，错过一班公交车往往意味着还要再等一个小时。

8. when去掉或改为that。
宾语要用关系代词而不是关系副词。

9. 第一个to→for。
代孩子们向lady道歉。

10. who→which/that。
指代商店而不是人，故who错误。

Answer 3

1.The train runs at a speed of 70 miles an hour when it crosses the desert.固定表达速度的
2.It is not rare in 90s when people in their fifties are going to university for further education.先行词是时间
3.She can’t help clean the house because she’s busy making a cake.原句的意思是禁不住做，应改成不能帮忙
4.The girl is so shy that she never speaks until spoken to.她不说，所以原句要表达直到别人跟她先说才说，应该是被动的
5.Many of his articles are good thought and people love to read them.介词of后面没有宾语，所以省掉
6.The pupils becoming quiet right away as their teacher rose his voice in anger.主句是持续性动作
7.In some parts of London,missing a bus means to wait for a hour.这里没有别的hour跟another对比体现它说的“另一个”
8.He often thought of his childhood that he spent with his grandma in that poor village.这句的with后没有宾语,从句缺成分，when不能作成分
9. Mr Smith apologized for the children to the lady for what they had done.替孩子向女士道歉
10.Is this the store which sells clothes?这里的先行词不是人

Answer 4

1.The train runs 【at】a speed of 70 miles an hour when it crosses the desert.【固定搭配】
2.It is not rare in 90s that people in their fifties 【were】 going to university for further education.【时态一致】
3.She can’t help 【clean】the house because she’s busy making a cake.【can't help doing是忍不住去做，与后面矛盾】
4.The girl is so shy that she never speaks until 【spoken】 to.【别人对她讲话】
5.Many of his articles are 【well】 thought of and people love to read them.【修饰动词用副词形式】
6.The pupils became quiet right away as their teacher 【raised】 his voice in anger.【rise是不及物动词】
7.In some parts of London,missing a bus means 【waiting】 for another hour.
8.He often thought of his childhood 【that】he spent with his grandma in that poor village.【作宾语要用关系代词而不是副词】
9. Mr Smith apologized 【for】the children to the lady for what they had done.替人家道歉
10.Is this the store 【which】sells clothes?【指代商店】

Answer 5

1.at a speed of
2.the university
3.help to clean
4.until spoken to
5.good改well
6.rose改raised(rise是不及物动词）
7.means waiting(mean to do 是表示意图要做什么）
8.spent time （when 代表the childhond，在后面的句子作时间状语，故spent后面没有东西了）
9.they改he
10.who改that（who是指人，而store并不是人）