Question

高二英语改错，大家快来帮帮忙啊，火急~~~

When I was in Senior 1, my dream is to achieve a good fanking in my grade. Many time I imagined home, my report card in my hand, eagerly to tell my parents me good news. Therefore when, I got the result, ti wasn't what I have expected. It was as if fate had played a trick on me. I got home and in low voice told my mother that my scores. To my surprise ,she didn't criticize me and said that I had tried my best. She let me understood that life is full of ups and downs. She encouraged me to believe in herself and never give up in the face of difficulties.
一共有10处错误，希望知道的朋友们能够帮帮满，写出错误并改正，万分感谢~~

Answer 1

改完之后的文章，应该是百分百正确的，请放心，我是高三英语老师，呵呵。
When I was in Senior 1, my dream is（改为was） to achieve a good fanking(此处应为ranking，是不是你打错了？) in my grade. Many time(改为times) I imagined home, my report card in my hand, eagerly to tell（to tell改为telling,此句考察imagine doing的用法） my parents me(改为my) good news. Therefore(改为However) when I got the result, it wasn't what I have(改为had) expected. It was as if fate had played a trick on me. I got home and in (此处加a)low voice told my mother that (去掉that)my scores. To my surprise ,she didn't criticize me and said that I had tried my best. She let me understood(改为understand) that life is full of ups and downs. She encouraged me to believe in herself(改为myself) and never give up in the face of difficulties.

Answer 2

is -was time-times me-my therefore-however have -had that/ understood- understand herself-myself the/ 很久没做改错了！只能改这些了，而且这文章读起来怎么这么不顺眼啊