帮忙看一下这篇英文作文有没有什么语法错误
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i love xxx ago 表达不正确。i used to love doing many things except reading. but beacuse of that thing i become xxxx 表达生硬语法也有错误。but it started to grow on me after one thing happened. i saw xxxxx and 后面并列的部分不对。saw her reading and talking to no one. not until用法不对。it was not until that moment that i came to know the pleasure of reading. it makes me happy and relaxed,不用can就可以。仅供参考,你有自己的想法也可以就用自己的。
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第一段but 和because of 矛盾
第二段I was not until that moment not后面是不是少了个动词?
第一段最后一句become是系动词,后加形容词
剩下的应该没有错物了,请采纳
第二段I was not until that moment not后面是不是少了个动词?
第一段最后一句become是系动词,后加形容词
剩下的应该没有错物了,请采纳
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如果你有自己的想法就用自己的,毕竟这篇作文不是我写的。要么就删掉,应该是通的。还有第一句话I used to love doing many things,expect reading.Everyone has his own hobby , it may give him a lot of happiness. My hobby isreading.要不你改成这样吧
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