Question

英语不好，大家帮我修改一下英语作文啊

下面这个是新概念2的原文。
I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting.
课文要求我回答问题将答案组成段落，不能超过50个单词
下面这个是我写的
Tim is an engineer，he was been there for six months。He has gone to Australian and he finding this trip very exciting，he is enjoying his trip very much。Tim has already visited many places ，he is in Alice Springs now。But Tim even been abroad before。

= = 我数了一下，53个词了，而且我整理出来的作文几乎是照着原文抄… 麻烦大家修改一下，顺便看看有没有错误的地方。好的追加·
还有一个问题。对比一下两个句子，模仿例句完成以下练习
eg：The bell is ringing The bell has just rung
1.he is having breakfast
我改的：He has just have breakfast
这样对不对?

Answer 1

将答案组成段落是什么意思？是将原文简写吗？
我把你的“删”改了一下。
Tim is an engineer who has been in Australia for six months.Tim have never been abroad before（个人觉得这句提前至此更好些）。Now he is enjoying his trip in Australia very much(这句和finding this trip very exciting意思相近，不用重复).He has already visited many places and is in Alice Springs now。
顺便告诉一下楼主，英语中两个独立的句子（主谓宾齐全）之间如果没有连词（如so，because，though，and等）连接，不管两个句子是什么关系都不能用逗号隔开，只能用表句子结束的句号分号等隔开。你的he is enjoying his trip very much前该用句号。考试的时候这种小错误很容易引起扣分，要注意哟。

下面是我写的，包括大部分信息点，所以可能没有你的那么简洁。希望可以对你有所帮助O(∩_∩)O。共48字
Tim is an engineer in a big firm in Australia.He`s been there for six months,during which he has visited many places.He has bought a car and gone to Alice Springs and will soon go to Darwin then Perth.He is on an exciting trip now.

第二个问题：
应该是He has just had breakfast.
have的过去分词是had