Question

Are We More Connected or More Alone写英语作文一篇

Answer 1

200字也叫essay？200字都不够写个introduction的，我看人家引入都要100字呢。
Technology provides us with more convience than ever before. We can shop online, talk online, read online, and we can also do things like go on facebook or instagram and 'like' each other, which is something that we cannot do before, but there are negative sides of technology and social medias.
The negative affect of technologies and social medias is that is, like Dr. Turkle said, "We are getting used to a new way of being alone together". Faces are now behind screens, heads are lowered on the street, and people across the dinner table are typing to communicate. There have been reports about car accidents because the person was not paying attention to the traffic light. This is all negative sides of technologies.
Another problem with social medias and the internet is that the user does not know who is behind the other screen. This leads to fraud and tricks, which we can sometimes see on the news about people's bank account lossing money. Sometimes you could think that you are talking to an eight years old girl but actually, it is a fifty years old man that you are talking to, which is not something people want because there are certain information that you can tell a eight years old child but not a fifty years old man.
The third problem with social medias and internet is that looking at the computer screen for too long is not good for people's eye sight. （这里自己找一个关于近年来人们平均视力下降的例子）
Even though the positive side of technologies, internet, and social medias are very clear, the negative sides are also obvious. People who are in the same room are not looking up, people are lossing money from their bank account, which is supposed to be safe, and people's eye sight is getting worst.
共320字，第2，3，4段里选一个删了吧，这道题我回答过三次，一摸一样