Question

请问一下这句话有没有语法错误

I'm very pleased to receive the delegation that i will take charge of your one-day tour in Tianjin on June 26.

Answer 1

有点问题，如果我写的话应该是这样的：

Everyone says that two is better than one, but i have a thought that i can live without you.

1. have thought : 现在完成时，楼主句子里翻译的话是（我一直在想）我没有你也可以生活；

有点语句不通顺，正常按欧美思维应该表述为（我有个想法，没有你我也可以生活），所以这里应该加个 a 才正确。

2. better than one 和but 是转折关系，中间最好加个逗号，欧美的长句毕竟较少，以短句为常用表达形式，像这种转折用逗号分隔可以很好地表达出来重点要说的话。

希望帮助到你！

Answer 2

有点问题，如果我写的话应该是这样的：

Everyone says that two is better than one, but i have a thought that i can live without you.

1. have thought : 现在完成时，楼主句子里翻译的话是（我一直在想）我没有你也可以生活；

有点语句不通顺，正常按欧美思维应该表述为（我有个想法，没有你我也可以生活），所以这里应该加个 a 才正确。

2. better than one 和but 是转折关系，中间最好加个逗号，欧美的长句毕竟较少，以短句为常用表达形式，像这种转折用逗号分隔可以很好地表达出来重点要说的话。

希望帮助到你！

Answer 3

回答如下
有，既然是定语从句，that需要做从句成分，你应该是想让tha做从句宾语，但这你用的your one day tour当宾语,你可以稍微改变一下，加一个介词，使your one day tour变成状语，during/for your one day tour

追问

I'm very pleased to
receive the delegation for your one-day tour in Tianjin on June 26.

是这么改吗

追答

I'm very pleased to receive the delegation that I will take charge of during your one-day tour in Tianjin on June 26.

这样

追问

好的，谢谢

Answer 4

which means that i will

Answer 5

后面的THAT 不对吧